After a party Pinkie pie had given, Fluttershy has to walk home all alone, until she meets a mysterious stallion. Both seem to get along well and a new friendship is born between the two. But will others believe it's only a friendship? And will their feelings for one another get the better of them?
New story time. First try didn't work (got blocked for making writing it like a script), but changed it now. Hopefully for the better.
Please enjoy!
P.s. I do not own the picture.
A like from me, but don't center every sentence and add more details to the story( what I meant is dialogue is fine, just add details about their surrounding). There is a few grammar errors made. It makes it hard for readers trying to read it and establish a setting or plot. Sorry for sounding rude.
Well I know who owns the picture (I used it in one of my stories): MetalPandora at Deviantart.
i love this it is my farortie yet
628441 No no no, I appreciate it. I will change it if you people prefer it that way. Thanks for telling me what I did wrong.
629815 Thank you! I'm glad you like it.
628689 Than 100% credit to the artist, picture is just plain awesome
interesting,,. good grammar from what I see, from a poet's perpestive... nicly done... keep it up...
I give it a 4 Derpys out of 5 Derpys...
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