• Published 19th Jun 2015
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The Mystery of Who Killed: Thunderlane! - trahzo



Thunderlane has been murdered and now the mane 7 are on the case with the help of a prince & his dragoness.

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Ch.4: The Checklist!

After Spike & May lost the killer, we go back to the apartment. Applejack turned the lights on.

"We lost her!" Said Fluttershy while frowning. "She's gonna kill all of those stallions and get away with it..." She was about to cry.

"Sorry I couldn't track the scent of her perfume girls, she was going to fast." Indigo told them.

"It's alright Indigo darling, we shall get her!" Rarity assured.

"You sound like the Rainbow Dash in my Kingdom." He replied.

"There's a Rainbow Dash in your Kingdom who speaks like Rarity?"

"Yes, and she isn't a pegasus like yourself, she's an earth pony. And she doesn't just speak like Rarity, always dressing in style like her too. I think I remember her being here on vacation." Indigo explained.

"Ungh!" Rainbow Dash groaned.

"Ahem, if you're done talking about the other Rainbow Dash, look what I found here." Said Twilight.

"What is it?" Asked Applejack.

"It's a checklist of every stallion she's planning on killing." Twilight concluded.

Then Twilight read aloud the current victims.

1. Jameson Craddock
Ignored me in the 1st year of Middle School
Current Residence: Baltimare

2. Kanji Writings
Ignored me in the 2nd year of Middle School
Current Residence: Fillydelphia

3.Marcus Cutie
Ignored me in the 2nd year of Middle School
Current Residence: Cloudsdale

4.Star Trekker
Ignored me in the Freshman year of High School
Current Residence: Fillydelphia

5.Thunderlane
Ignored me in the Sophomore year of High School
Current Residence: Ponyville
Visiting: Fillydelphia

"Girls, look at this." Said Twilight. "The next victim is here in Fillydelphia!"

"Who is it?" Asked Indigo.

"Ride Along, he ignored the killer in Junior Year of High School, wait a minute."

"What is it Twilight?" Asked Rainbow Dash.

"Spike visited Fillydelphia once, and he told me Ride Along a cop!"

*Gasp!*

"Everyone, we gotta get to the Police Department now, if we're to stop this killer!"

"Yeah!"

They were about to exit the building but then a cop approached them.

"Princess Twilight Sparkle?"

"Yes."

"Prince Indigo?"

"Yes."

"Do these 2 dragons belong to you?" Then the cop pointed to Spike & May.

"Heh, hey girls."