Follow us, through a world you know, a world at war with pastel ponies, through pain, through the death of innocence, through a world gone mad, on the edge of oblivion…once more unto the breach, dear friends, once more…
...road, who had rode the road to the road’s ending...
that seems like one too many roads. The King and an iPad mini...why those that seem off? You capture the proud nature of the royals while still giving them the air of age. For that I bow to you.
And we immediately start the next section with a lot of feels. I mean it, this right here is powerful and anyone who has experienced the loss of a loved one will relate to Harry immensely. Words cannot express how much I feel for this scene. All in all a good start to the story (well prologue). We get a nice feel for the Royals. My personal fav is your version of William who comes off as a quiet soul with a lot on his mind. I am left wondering what happened to Phillip part of me knows he probably died. Any faults in this are minor nitpicks at best.
that seems like one too many roads.
The King and an iPad mini...why those that seem off?
You capture the proud nature of the royals while still giving them the air of age. For that I bow to you.
And we immediately start the next section with a lot of feels. I mean it, this right here is powerful and anyone who has experienced the loss of a loved one will relate to Harry immensely. Words cannot express how much I feel for this scene.
All in all a good start to the story (well prologue). We get a nice feel for the Royals. My personal fav is your version of William who comes off as a quiet soul with a lot on his mind. I am left wondering what happened to Phillip part of me knows he probably died. Any faults in this are minor nitpicks at best.