For years and centuries Luna has lived with the fact, that nopony has ever seen her night. Her subjects shun it away, despite for what she has done for them. Her own sister starts to foccus on her duties, overseeing the troubles of her younger sibling. Luna is filled with hate, anger, bitterness, sadness and jealousy. A dangerous mixture.
Her life changes, when she meets a dark, shadowy Alicorn during one faithful night. This mare shows sympathie and caring. She tries to help Luna the best she can. When Luna fails to ask Celestia for a very certain favour, the time of ignorance had reached its limits. Desperate, angry, sad and frustrated Luna agrees for a deal, that will change her entire life....
This was really cool! :)
This is a great story, but I would definitely recommend getting an Editor. There are some very jarring errors in the story.
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Really stupid question, but what kind of mistake did I made in which line.
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No problem.
All those lines had mistakes. The first one, you compare the EAST tower to the EAST tower. That should be west on one of them.
The second line should say flooded, not floated.
In the third one, the word thin shouldn`t have a E.
The forth one should say care instead of cared.
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Okay, then I can change it. Sorry, I did not read the correction probably in this one.