(Not an Assassins Creed crossover)
Swift Slash was born and raised as an assassin. Killing other ponies is all he knows how to do. He lives in Anvil, a town that is controlled by two major groups, The Assassins and The Guardians, both of which want full control over the town. The two groups have been fighting for as long as they can remember. Not with words, but with swords, knives, daggers, and well, you get the idea. One day, something drives Swift out of his town...something that he thought would never happen. He must now stay incognito for the remainder of his life, but where will he continue?
-Contains gore and minor cursing
-Swift Slash is the pony on the cover
-Like I said before, this has nothing to do with the Assassins Creed universe. However I did use elements from AC: The robes the assassins are wearing, the hidden blade, and parkour.(Why? Because those things are friggin' cool!) Other than that, it's a completely different story. (Plus, I have only played AC brotherhood and AC revelations so I'm not too familiar with the AC story.)
-For characters I have 'other' meaning more characters that I couldn't fit
-Feel free to ask any questions if you do not understand something
Okay everyone, one more time: Not an Assassins Creed crossover. Anyway, hope you guys enjoy. I worked harder on this than literally anything else (Even schoolwork) So hope you like it! And yes, I released it all at the same time because I have Obsessive Compulsive Disorder. I can't release a story unless it's 100% complete or it will make me go insane. If it's over-whelming, put it in 'Read Later' and finish it. THAT'S WHAT IT'S THERE FOR! (Sorry if I sound like a big dumb meanie and sorry about the shipping, it was requested XD)
EDIT: somebody used the cover picture before I could publish the story. I had this picture on May 20th, so nobody say I copied someone else.
Haven't got around to reading the story yet, but I have a question that's been bugging me. How exactly do they go about doing parkour without the use of hands?
763730 It's a thing called skill.
763730 Oh, I don't mean like climb on buildings, I mean like jump off building and stuff.
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They should be able to climb buildings.
Why? Pinkie physics, my friend.
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So basically they're jumping on and off buildings.
763760 Eh, you'll see. I barely do it.
1 thing to say SUPER SPECIAL AWESOME EPIC TO THE POWER OF INFINITE
anyway keep it up
Great concept, but I really believe that this could have been written better ( no offense, constructive criticism is on it's way). Swift would be a much better character if he was just a bit more modest, the showing off thing really doesn't appeal to me (maybe make him an earth pony? or a Unicorn, that way it would be alot easier for him to use blade I say). Honestly, the only thing that this fic really needs is more time and consideration on the dialog and descriptions/thoughts; as to avoid any repetitive-ness and improve Swift's depth of character
763915 Thank you for saying it politely
I really don't see the point of disliking such a good story.
763949 Thanks!
I don't think the people who disliked it read the whole thing.
763999Yea
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Not an Assassins Creed crossover
Crossover would imply that some characters from the AC serie would get in in your story.
Maybe in this case that would be a more a theme rip-off.
Hey! Look over there who worked on Brotherhood and Revelation.
764356 Dramatic affect
764395 justify reason or die 1000 deaths I loved the story but that killed it just like mass effect 3 did please write a alternate ending or die
764432 You can only die once you know.
And I'm no the writer
764356 I'm sorry but I'm going to have to remove that comment :( Too big of a spoiler.
765667 Then you might really enjoy my other fanfic!
Give it a try if you want! It's called:
The Blaze In My Heart
766590 XD I feel like an annoying person tryna advertise themselves. Sorry!
764457 whoops didnt look
Why....
When I first saw this I said "What?"
That was epic!
I then started reading, and began to like it. I laughed (yea, who didn't) at the different moments when Swift messed up, "You ran into my closet and yelled: 'Where the Hell is Narnia.' "
There's still something I don't quite get, about Swift punching trees and sending them 10 feet away, I mean, I get it, Swift is strong, but even the steroid filled pegasus (that white one in Hurricane Fluttershy, that always said "YEEAAAHH") would have a hard time punching that tree and even rip it out from the ground. I only wanted to point that; being in a comical fashion, what I said doesn't have much (if any) worth.
Sad ending, but it couldn't be better. However you could have done a bit more than just a song from RD, feels like something is lacking (and I can't think of Rainbow singing), but still the ending was great.
Throwing all of the above aside for a moment, I want to thank you for making some "tribute" (let's call it that way) to Assassins Creed, because if it was a crossover I wouldn't have read it, since I haven't played any game of the franchise (besides the mobile versions, but that dosn't cut it) and I didn't want to spoil the story for me (more than it actually is).
One more thing, the title (Reminisce), I never heard of that word, and it magically fits the fic! With those two factions and their culture, any other title would have been horrible (I'm exaggerating, but it's pretty true (I think)).
Another great fic, and the cover image adds a great touch, I can't help it but say "Sooo awesome!"
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please change the end. I think it would be much better with a more happy ending
Beyond that great story
848750 Wow, never had someone write out a full review in the comments! Thanks for your criticism and positive comments. I have 5 fics in the process of being made (I like writiing fanfics
) and they all have a better premisce than this story (for the most part) You can watch me if you want and maybe you'll like them too! (You don't have to watch me, I'm not a watch whore, just asking xD)
852184 Sorry man, but I wanted a sad ending. I like making 'sad' stories because I like the feeling when somebody says they cried when they read my story (I'm not a freak, I promise) And I hope to touch as many souls as 'My Little Dashie' did. Most of my stories I am going to write will be sad, so sorry you didn't like the ending all that much, and thanks for the compliment
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I'll keep in mind the fact of watching you, besides I'm thinking of writing fanfics of my own too, sounds like fun to keep your mind off of videogames, and everything (within a limit) can happen in what you tell, the hard part is to get other people to get interested, though it's not the end of the world!
While we are at it I want to ask something, whenever I get a fanfic done, would you mind if I get you to read it for criticism? I wouldn't like to do a fic without revision. And I'm sure you know more than me for story narration.
853224 I wouldn't mind at all! Whenever you get it done, tell me and I'll read it whenever I get a chance
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913225 Is that a good thing? lol I iz confuzed.
He is he's dad
i what would happen if he need to go to the bath room at night ?
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Mk. First chapter, a shit load of rush. And his dad told him "I raised you a killer, act like one?" What the hell? What kind of father says that?
I'm not expecting much, but I'll continue this story..
Edit: This could have been much better. Sorry...
1220937 My friend told me to put it in the group. A crossover would imply it has to do with the AC universe. It doesn't, but it has elements. So it references AC. Therefore, it makes sense to place it in the group. Especially since the main character wears Ezio's robe.
That ending...
WHYYY!!!
SO SAD!!!
*Sniff* But, good story
1382774 Thanks! ;3
Awesome. You sir, get a another faver. You also get MisterGTFO's Seal of Approval.
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Don't take this wrong now, this one is good the other GTFO one represents the shittyness of a Fic. Be sure to read my fic series, Assassin's Tear's fics.
1392526 I'm sorry Mr. GTFO, but I don't read fics ;~; Whenever I try to, I literally forget EVERYTHING I just read. It really annoys me so I just gave up. Not to mention I'm trying to learn to make dubstep, so I have no time to read.
1393093 kk, I understand. I shoulda know the name "Neon" had something to do with dubstep. I couldn't put my finger on it though... lol
1393132 :3
very cool chapter
a drunk assassin, cool
waiting for more
764374 same here
Alternate ending??
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That's some Star Wars shit right there...
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Probably homicidal though... *shudder*
THAT WAS SO ANTICLIMACTIC IT WAS FUNNY (ironically)
ehhhh this fic has me grey zoned, I wanna like it but can't. It's not bad over all, but the ending is just, bad. You build up a love interest and immediately kill it, not really a tear jerker. I can however appreciate someone not being changed by their interactions with the mane 6, which is why i like it. You just never see that.