An Emerl displace fic. Basically it's a guy cosplay as emerl gets teleported to Equestia except the the tree of Harmony intercept his landing. Now he has serve as a vessel for the tree of Harmony in his head while protecting his new home and charge.
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6090572 I'm fine either way to be honest.
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Thank you kind person.
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Sorry kinda thought of keeping the color words for the princesses, mane 6, Harmony and main antagonists.
I am going to most likely avoid Shakespearean translator and just say Emerl translated when he is around. The translator takes a bit of time. But if it kills the story I would be wise to keep art, thou, and some of the basic ones. Thanks for giving a comment and critic.
Don't use color coated text, its annoying. Get an editor if you don't have one already. Have Emerl lie about being Harmony's vessel. Stop writing Shakespear. And don't change his personality unless he goes level 5 or higher, isn't that the reason you put that drawback in the story?
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Ok I will stop the color text after I ask everyone who favored my story or the ones I know , I asked for an editor and no one responded to it. The lie yeah good point I will need to do it in fact making chapter 3 (currently planning stage) introducing celly and lulu to tree bark(Harmony's alias) and besides Emerl won't bring the vessel idea since the whole power attracts unwanted attention. Which chapter is the personality change so I can give notice and concern. I will definitely abandon the Shakespearian language, but it would feel off for ponies in that era to chat normal so any suggestion or just go by my ability as an author. (Note: Emerl can translate, but he would not be their 24/7.) Thank you for your honest review. Personality drawback depends
or the other ability in the interlude
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Hey should I stop the color text in my story
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I have done most of the first step with the exception between the mental conversation between Harmony and Emerl in chapter 1 since 1st point of view mental conversation can be my exception and that is a small one.