I love how they force Rainbow to love the idea of her friend and other ponies being tortured and abused by the aliens, and Fluttershy to love exposing herself to stallions. It won't take long for Rainbow Dash to wish for something like this to happen to herself, I guess.
It remains to be seen if their depraved and submissive urges will primarily be aimed at the alien experiments or if the experiments include implanting in them a need to seek out stallions to continue the abuse they're being addicted to.
I don't know if anyone cares, but I just had to facehoof because of myself.
Pondering whether 'realised' or 'realized' is more correct and checking several dictionaries while writing on a chapter, I found out I've used 'realised' three times and 'realized' six times (along with other variants of ‘to realize’). So much for continuity
I went ahead and changed every 'realised' to 'realized'. If you find any other spelling discontinuities or british formulations which are uncommon in american english please let me know. I'm native in neither of those two and don't necessarily realize if I mix something up. My plan is to write this story completely in american english.
(I didn't write this as a blogpost, because I didn't want to annoy anyone with a notification)
6241224 In other words... you used both versions more often than you realiszsed.
Incidentally, these aliens have yet to do anything to Pinkie Pie. I wonder what they can pull with her. Engorge her breasts so they bounce obscenely every time she hops? Condition her to stop bouncing everywhere and instead do a really sensual, slutty strut? Addict her to creamy, creamy stallion "frosting"?
It was hard for me to find something erotic with Pinkie Pie that wouldn't be terribly OOC, but I had her planned for a later chapter for a while now.
It's not more than two sentences of concept, but I still have something. But now I'm thinking about replacing the actual frosting I had planned with your idea of "frosting". I like that idea.
(It'll take a while until it is published though. I only want to publish one chapter per week)
Wow! I haven't seen this movie before and I only watched the scene you mentioned just now, but there is a strange similarity to the next chapter (hopefully coming this friday).
It's only the eye thing, but still a strange coincidence that this is posted so shortly before I release the chapter. Just as a note: I usually have the contents of a chapter outlined several weeks before it is published.
best chapter yet but I still wonder if she really and I mean really liked to see her friend get filled with that stuff. Also I would wonder if the mane 6 would have to meet the aliens in person....
One of the sexiest chapters yet!
I love how they force Rainbow to love the idea of her friend and other ponies being tortured and abused by the aliens, and Fluttershy to love exposing herself to stallions. It won't take long for Rainbow Dash to wish for something like this to happen to herself, I guess.
It remains to be seen if their depraved and submissive urges will primarily be aimed at the alien experiments or if the experiments include implanting in them a need to seek out stallions to continue the abuse they're being addicted to.
I don't know if anyone cares, but I just had to facehoof because of myself.
Pondering whether 'realised' or 'realized' is more correct and checking several dictionaries while writing on a chapter, I found out I've used 'realised' three times and 'realized' six times (along with other variants of ‘to realize’). So much for continuity
I went ahead and changed every 'realised' to 'realized'. If you find any other spelling discontinuities or british formulations which are uncommon in american english please let me know. I'm native in neither of those two and don't necessarily realize if I mix something up. My plan is to write this story completely in american english.
(I didn't write this as a blogpost, because I didn't want to annoy anyone with a notification)
6241224
In other words... you used both versions more often than you realiszsed.
Incidentally, these aliens have yet to do anything to Pinkie Pie. I wonder what they can pull with her. Engorge her breasts so they bounce obscenely every time she hops? Condition her to stop bouncing everywhere and instead do a really sensual, slutty strut? Addict her to creamy, creamy stallion "frosting"?
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It was hard for me to find something erotic with Pinkie Pie that wouldn't be terribly OOC, but I had her planned for a later chapter for a while now.
It's not more than two sentences of concept, but I still have something. But now I'm thinking about replacing the actual frosting I had planned with your idea of "frosting". I like that idea.
(It'll take a while until it is published though. I only want to publish one chapter per week)
6282254
Wow! I haven't seen this movie before and I only watched the scene you mentioned just now, but there is a strange similarity to the next chapter (hopefully coming this friday).
It's only the eye thing, but still a strange coincidence that this is posted so shortly before I release the chapter. Just as a note: I usually have the contents of a chapter outlined several weeks before it is published.
Here’s the scene for everyone else interested:
best chapter yet but I still wonder if she really and I mean really liked to see her friend get filled with that stuff.
Also I would wonder if the mane 6 would have to meet the aliens in person....