Liking it so far Not sure what else I can say sadly.
I do like the idea that Equestria's sun is actually lethal to humans though. Its a shame that things don't work out for the better with a lot of the pony-human couples. But hey, it adds a nice touch to the backstory, the ever present danger that, no matter what, they have to go home or suffer horribly.
"Another human, collapsing from a solar overdose! If he doesn't get home to his planet soon, he'll probably die! I have to hurry for him! I have to treat him now!" And I have to irreversibly turn him into a pony to stop it! Oh why, plot progression, why? AKA the gist of many HiE stories.
NOT PEACHES i wish the humans could stay forever
I'm liking it so far.
Liking it so far Not sure what else I can say sadly.
I do like the idea that Equestria's sun is actually lethal to humans though. Its a shame that things don't work out for the better with a lot of the pony-human couples. But hey, it adds a nice touch to the backstory, the ever present danger that, no matter what, they have to go home or suffer horribly.
Quite sad as well :(
'Melissa'? What, she doesn't get a cutesy embarrassing nickname like the other humans?
Edit: Oh, right, 'Daylight'. Never mind.
>She curled over he legs
>tall grey and white pegasii parents
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I got that.
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hmmm? No human tag.
Peaches, NNNNNNOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Alrighty
Was that a reference to George Strait's Check Yes or No I spotted in there?
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There might be a subconscious one. I didn't plan that, but I'm a big Strait fan indeed (fellow Texan)!
"Another human, collapsing from a solar overdose! If he doesn't get home to his planet soon, he'll probably die! I have to hurry for him! I have to treat him now!" And I have to irreversibly turn him into a pony to stop it! Oh why, plot progression, why?
AKA the gist of many HiE stories.