A year after being sealed away by Twilight and her friends, Discord breaks free with some strange magical energy that he can't quite figure out. But that doesn't matter, for all he cares about revenge. This time, he has a proper plan, determining that the only way to beat the Mane 6, is with themselves. After Concocting the Elements of Disharmony, he seeks a way of tracking down the necessary energy to create these dark clones, and discovers an unusual ally, from the Astral Plane. Side by side, they make their way around Ponyville, preparing for the final defeat of their enemies...will it ever come?
Edit:Spelling and Grammar fixed...I think, if anyone spots mistakes, please message me privately.
Chapters (4)
Haven't read yet, but this sounds like the Rowdy Ruff Boys to the Power Puff Girls... you have my attention.
Edit: Okay, I've read it. There's some good and bad. The plot of the story itself is very intriguing, I will be keeping an eye on it. You have a kind of... I don't know what to call it, elevated writing style, which is fine, but sometimes you let the style continue into the dialogue, which is fine for ancients like Discord and Nightmare Moon, but feels awkward for Twilight and other normal ponies. It was pretty well written overall, but needs a little bit of proofreading. Unnecessary or missing capitalization and some punctuation errors and stuff like that, but I think you can find them on your own.
Also, it's moving a bit quickly for me. Maybe some more description between talking and walking and spell-casting and such. I'ma watchin'. 
610896 I gotta agree with this one, It definitely reminds me of the Rowdy Ruff Boys episode. I'll read and see where this goes.
Havent read this yet but im reading another EoD fic now and its very good so ill see about this.
this will be good
The description needs a bit of a grammar check, but the plot sounds intriguing.
610896 This story was designed as an opener, it leads into my own personal alternate storyline for MLP, so yea, it is kind of rushed, because it leads to bigger and better things. It was also sort of designed like, a Multipart Episode, like a Season Premiere~ I understand that there are some errors, but as I look through it, it seems trivial to go through and correct them, because of how minor they are.
611412, to an accomplished writer, there is no such thing as a minor grammatical or spelling error. A writer must take the time to make sure his/her work of art is free of blemishes. I am a college English professor and I can't even count the number of times I've been thrown off a good book because there is some kind of blemish in the writing. (though, to be fair, most of them are printing errors.) But, if you say this is just a precursor, then I look forward to your next piece of work. I see great potential here.
I'm currently in love with the concept you have created her, I'll be keeping track of this story.
611743 There is a difference between Fanfiction writing, and Proper Writing. With fanfiction, the basis is in the story, and errors are not as important as they are in proper, published works. In my more important stories, I take more time and care, but things like this, Simple stories and minor fanfictions, I do it for the fun, not the potential. If you want to see what I'm capable of, I have many more stories in my galleries through the links on my bio.
I really like this. There are a few grammar errors, but it's not that distracting because the rest of the action is so strong.
647184 I did what I could to fix the grammar, and I think I should change it to Hiatus....I wont have a writing muse til midsummer...