Sometimes things just happen. This land of rainbows and good has a dark underbelly of evil. Sometimes you need a monster to defeat monsters. I will be that monster.
Well, looks like Shining got turned into some sort of abomination. After all, who is Anderson without Alucard. I bet he even needs to drink blood just to don't fall apart.
Well, on one side, I want to see you improve your writing so I don't have to stop every other sentence to figure out what you actually meant, but on the other, the forums are open and exist, please ask for an editor. I will track this story because Alexander in Equestria is interesting and entertaining to read, but please fix your grammar for all that is sane!
I'm starting to get the feeling that English is not your first language... Would I be correct in that assumption? You may seriously want to invest in an editor or ten... I'd be willing to do it, but my time is limited, so what I'd be able to get done in a day would be limited to three or less chapters. Three on a maximum, unless it's a really good day.
Well, looks like Shining got turned into some sort of abomination. After all, who is Anderson without Alucard.
I bet he even needs to drink blood just to don't fall apart.
Other then the errors, Awesome~
6037164 Well I need a Rival for Anderson... plus the Look of Twilight face
Great chapter.
You so need an editor who speaks English.
Other than that it's pretty enjoyable. I just find myself changing the grammar in my head.
6076649 Well I try to do some without help and a editor would be nice
Nothing new, nothing new, hiatus, nothing new, cancelled, nothing new...
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Cancelled?! Why is it cancelled? I loved this. Why do all the Hellsing crossovers get cancelled or just stop?
6089727 oh my I forgot to uncancel it.
6089752 You did? It's just incomplete? Phew! That was a close one.
6076649 Same. I'm just blunt but this is horrible grammar, that of a five year old's.
Well, on one side, I want to see you improve your writing so I don't have to stop every other sentence to figure out what you actually meant, but on the other, the forums are open and exist, please ask for an editor. I will track this story because Alexander in Equestria is interesting and entertaining to read, but please fix your grammar for all that is sane!
I'm starting to get the feeling that English is not your first language... Would I be correct in that assumption? You may seriously want to invest in an editor or ten... I'd be willing to do it, but my time is limited, so what I'd be able to get done in a day would be limited to three or less chapters. Three on a maximum, unless it's a really good day.
So alexanddr began the formation of IscariotXIII?
I think this would be more interesting if he says his phrases or quotes before he get into action