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youmaycallmewhite


short, white, striped sweaters.

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Lol i am looking forward to the next chapter, i have a feeling this is going to be good

Really interesting start, definitely going to keep an eye on this story.

I am really curious as to how Twilight got a silver plated 10 inch blade, a human sized recursive bow, silver tipped arrows also human sized, kerosene, and styrofoam in one hour.

I think he shall go full Van Helsing, long coat and hat included.

I am guessing Slender since pony Wendigos look like well, ponies. In fact there is even some writing in relation to Slenderman and the weather.

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Thanks, the support means a lot!

6033568 I'm hoping the answer to that question is not 'Because Marty Stu'.

Not going to ask how Todd got there. But the question is how do ponies have chemical industry sufficient to make polysterene foam. And Styrofoam is a brand, you know?
Nice beginning, through. Let them have fun catching a black cat in the Everfree. And catch a black shark. Metaphorically speaking of course.

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Some things are more enjoyable if you just read it, I mean I hear what you're saying though, however most people know all polystyrene as styrofoam and in common usage it's refered to more often as styrofoam than its proper name so I just went with it. Besides, if you're willing to accept the juxtaposition of clay homes with thatched roofs with technology like trains and heavy music equipment for vinyl scratch, is the chemical engineering capacity to produce something as simple as polystyrene that bizarre? I mean, their potions are just the mixing of chemical compounds to produce a new substance, and they have the ability to use it in some pretty far out ways. Besides...fucking horse magic.

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Oh, almost forgot to say thanks for the support! :twilightblush:

6036339 Forget it, if they made headphones and neon light which is a load of hi-hech - it is canon. We deal with it.
And maybe pony magic just doesn't work well without clay homes with thatched roofs? Who knows. There is Manehattan for skyscrapers, and P-ville vas founded by rural Earth Pony community fond of such things.
To be fair, never heard of styrofoam anyway. And an incredibly important compound in potions is magic, which polymeres, like styrofoam, kinda lack.

6036344 No problem. Looking forward.

tfw Twilight have no idea against what they going

-What the hay is this thing!?
-It's wendigo.
-They don't look like this!
-Tell him about it.

Yes, the good old Molotov, kills both the fantastic and the mundane alike.
But the beast must have been as hard as stone at least, because champagne bottles are really sturdy as glass bottles goes because they need to contain a lot of pressure from strong carbonation.

It won't hurt to warm up!

6040291 Just make a few deep scratches on a bottle, and it will shatter way easier. Also, bones are pretty hard, especially when strengthened by magic.

Looks like this Wendigo was closer to human myths than to ponies' ones. And a home-made flamethrower? Not cool. Because flame is hot.
A bit of character developement as well. Looks like Todd isn't like Der Tod, he was a sweet boy .. once. Makes me wonder how the hell he got to Equestria.
His father .. one must howl with the wolves, after all. They say Army makes you a man, but if you are already, it makes you a Man. Maybe he is bad, maybe not. But looks like he was trying to make Todd a man. Well, a least he gave him willpower.

KILL IT WITH FIRE!!!

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NO MEMES, NO MERCY!

lol thanks for the support!

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Glad some one knows their incendiaries. Thanks, I'm really very pleased with how Todd is developing. Your support means a lot, and its the reason I stayed up till an ungodly hour to finish this last chapter. So thank you again!

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Actually, thank you for noticing that. Usually I would use a jewelers file to weaken the bottle. When you use this process you can control the spread of the fuel somewhat. Thanks for reading and I hope you enjoy!

it's nice that twi thinks that predators are stupid and then she shown how much humans are way smarter then ponies

6042672 Actually, calling him predator is wrong. There is no such classification as 'predator'/'prey' sapient species yet, as we are one and only known to our scientists.

6041742 If we're talking about more or less home-made weapons, can recommend ANFO. It is made from fertilizer and fuel oil. No wonder that ponies can have fertilizer production, and kerosene was in use long before diesel engines. And it goes BOOM! IRA recommends, after all.

6042861 in our world this is very true. However, in Sunbutts magical world of bullshit most species are fully sapient...sort of. So it would be safe to assume they'd classify Todd a predator.

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IRA? What's my retirement have to do with this? LOL JK

6043183 IRA as in Irish Republican Army.
6043174 The one and only expert on humans in Equestria as of now it Todd himself. Lyra has no actual experience even if she's interested in humans in this verse so she desn't count.

it took you this long to post this short. but it is high quality so. I'll let you off the hook.

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Well thank you Bronin. To be honest I had it done yesterday, but I read through it a few times and I spent some time thinking about it, and I started to dislike then entire thing. It was choppy, boring and out of place, so I stripped away everything I didn't like... and it left maybe fifty words. So I re-wrote the whole thing. I hope to have another out some time tomorrow. Glad you enjoy!

6046713 much appreciated very cool wow

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Could I as a big favor of you, could you describe how you see Todd's appearance? I'm just curious how other's see him.

6046775 I see him as a really short black guy who's only consider ed tall because pony are like 3' and he's like 5'6". and he always has a scowl on his face that compliments his grey eyes that are filled with contempt and hatred on a glance but after awhile they see a shell of regret in them he has a buzz cut of black hair that's really dry and I think that his canines are a little more pronounced then a normal humans so the ponies freak when they see this large black guy who's shouting with rage at them for not having steak.

no periods

6046856 No idea on his looks.

So, his appearance in Equestria is somehow Luna's doing? Interesting. Also, voices show that he had some family,"she" is most likely a "special somebody", and Todd suffered a catastrophe he could somehow prevent(or he couldn't and this is survivor's syndrome. More likely).

Even if he only stood between Twi and 'wendigo' only because of his duty, such moments are really bonding. Are you aiming for a full-scale shipping or just a running comedy line? Glad to see it. Relationship makes humans ... more human.

So Luna brought him to equestria and tossed him in hoping he will protect them without even arranging a place for him to stay? He is taking it all like a champ, probably only because ponies are too cute to be mad at for to long even more when someone colorful and fluffy tries to act all serious(even if the buggers steel you from your own dimension, or he had some serious problems back at home to get away from anyway, after all a person that lives a good life usually does not know how to make Molotov's that would work on "soft targets".)

6047184 why are you a dressing me?

6049018 Thanks! Working hard on another right now.

10/10 I demand moar

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Ask and you shall receive... later.

6050577 Lol, if it helps I'm working on the next chapter already. Basically that means a few hours of pacing and thinking about what to write, an hour or two of planning, actually writing, and then an hour or so of editing.

6050622 k but you best hurry bby

Twilight learns to use 'f' word?

6050945 *Generic pokemon move list joke here*

Not overly bulky, tining hair, early 30s, perhaps one or two not visible bullet wounds.

6 foot 1, strong, but not ripped, early to mid 30's, dark brown hair and brown eyes, something more than a buzzcut but not overly long, tanned caucasian.

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