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I wasn't expecting a stream of consciousness, but I was pleasantly suprised. Well written minus one or two gramatical errors. This would explain her not showing up in any of the new episodes thus far.
Oh wow I really loved this!
This is sad, very sad. Despite her being one of my favorite characters and in the end being dead, I did enjoy this fic.
Surprisingly dark, and sad. Would you mind if i were to write an alternate to this?
We meet again...
Anyway great story. I love how you've highlighted why she hasn't returned and what such a defeat would to to one's psyche
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Thank you guys! It means a lot for people to like the story
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I guess it IS kind of depressing...
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Be my guest.
Ha!! Take THAT you racist, arrogant, hypocritical, pseudo-communist bitch! That's what you get for refusing to listen to Best Pony Twilight Sparkle and her Best Pony friends and wanting to turn a nation of savants into a nation of cripples!
But anyways, other than a couple of grammatical errors, this was a great one-shot.
Very nice, a believable ending to that episode. Definitely going on my list.
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Agreed. For a first fic, this is spectacular!
That... was pretty grim indeed. Even as an antagonist in the series, all I can say here is poor thing. A pretty bad way to go, in gripes of starvation and insanity that came from weeks of loneliness.
There were a few mistakes here and there, but otherwise it was pretty well written
I liked this story. Really sad. Your execution of the story was done well in my opinion. I found it really interesting to feel and understand her last moments being spent with rocks knowing what Starlight Glimmer used to be to what she was at the moment.
However, two sentences read a bit off for me.
Maybe removing "is is" with "it's" or "It is" could make it read smoother?
I think you meant "ever" in this sentence? That's what I think. I could be wrong. Still is a good story though.
So either Starlight starved to death in those caves, or she had an escape route and is just biding her time.
So, not bad, but you should go over it with I fine toothed comb (or better yet: an editor). There are a few lines with missing words like this one.
Agreeing with the above: this needs an editor.
And then at the start of season six, the Crystal Empire froze over.
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What!? That’s cruel!
So sad
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Well, you can’t say that now lol