Hmmm. Where do I start? Well first off I'm the leader of the Wolf Army and stand proudly as a brony. I love to write and read and do my best to struggle day after day for a new leash on life.
Together at birth, but separated during life. Only to be brought back together by destiny. Such is the fate for the daughters of the Alicorns. Twilight, Starlight, and Sunset. What do the three truly have together that makes them so great. Why do they pose the greatest challenge for each other. Well it's simple really. Well... if you have siblings of course you'd understand.
(this will only be a one shot because I've been sick. Also Merry Christmas. )
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Kinda sad that this is only a one shot. It would have made for a great continuing story as Twilight deals with this revelation.
6767898 Yea I had thought about that, but I would really have the time to expand on it more unless someone volunteers to helps write it.
Well, this was a short and sweet story, but too much so. I didn't really give get anything out of this that I didn't get from the synopsis. And once you reached the reveal, you kinda just ended the story there. No discussion, no repercussions, just straight up entirely predictable revelation and then poof! End story.
It's an interesting take, but this story leaves a lot to be desired, unfortunately. I really feel there is a lack of actual narrative. I would work on that.
6768186 Yea. I had wrote this out mostly because I once heard a quote that a story doesn't need a lot of beef to be good. So I was trying to test this out. I can see what he meant, but it's a bit hard to keep it from being predictable. Plus I was sick when I started writing this. This story actually went through an entire revamp because when I stopped being sick I looked at it and went "What did I write!?".
Can I take over this story?
7509064 Sure I don't mind at all. Tell me when it's posted up so I can drop a link for you on here.
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Do you have any ideas who is who's? And is Candace envolved or not? Is there a fifth alicorn or not? I think sunset is Celestia daughter and who is starlight and Twilight mother? Or is that up to me?
Well I actually had it planned to be Celestia and sunset to be related, Luna and Twilight, and Cadence and Glimmer. Tho you can switch it up as you please. They're all suppose to be born from Celestia and the others through their love connection and magic. Or at least that's the point I got up to.
You should make a big story about this Idea
7805967 See. I really want this to continue, but I feel like I'm not the right person to continue it.
You can
Yeah, Flurry Heart said "screw you"
For the record, this story leaves a lot to be desired. I needed to be expanded on a lot. Starlight and Sunset's reactions seemed just a dull as Twilight's. Sure, they already had it figured out but the way it was written didn't convey that pretty well.
Decent story idea, it had potential. Sad to see that it didn't live up to expectations.
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Yea I feel like a lot could be done with it be I'm not the right person to convey this sort of idea.
I'M NOT THE ONLY ONE TO HAVE THOUGHT OF THIS OUT OF NOWHERE IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT!!!
Basically, similar premise but it got complicated fast and if I ever write it I have a full universe's worth of world building