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*SeƱorita*
6137905 Editing...
6137933 you should consult your spannish to me, I'm a native speaker
6137944 I will. Thanks for the offer, bro.
Really Martian, really.
Still no Apple Pony.
6138035 In due time, Corey. The circumstances have to make sense before I just toss in Mane 6 characters, y'know?
Take the time you need. After all, we aren't paying you to crank out chapters.
6138238 Glad you understand, bro. I'll see how much time I can put into this story regardless, though. I like how much opportunity Reverie Bound has to become something truly unique.
6139609 -.-
As always, a humorous and informative chapter!
6140668 I try my best, bro! I'm glad you enjoyed it, because I'm still wondering what direction I can take this story next.
6141053 There is quite a bit of potential with these ideas, isn't there?
dont like this chapter. The main character is trying too hard to be "cool" and the bit about a woman holding the door open was just a waste of words. Everytime he called her "girl" I facepalmed. I dont know why your dialogue style so drastically changed, but hopefully it will be less like this in the future.
6141279 Glad you're being truthful. Still, this is a view into his personality for now, and I can guarantee you won't like everyone - not even the main character - all the time. He's a bit of an ass if you haven't gathered that much. I'm sorry that his behavior put you off of the chapter as a whole, but I'm thankful that you're voicing your dislikes so that I can make changes before the story as a whole suffers. I encourage you to do this in the future!
I'm still REALLY miffed that the MC is getting passed around like a chew-toy.