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Malice In Wonderland


"Eternal chaos comes with chocolate rain, you guys. CHOCOLATE RAIN!!!!" I don't know about any of you, but I'm rooting for eternal chaos. GO DISCORD!!

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Eclipse Skies is a young pegasus pony. She lives in Cloudsdale with her family. It's not pleasant for her, but she doesn't complain. One day, something horrible happens that she is forced to cope with. The way she deals with it isn't the way most ponies would deal with it, but it's the way she decided to deal with it. Maybe it worked for her, maybe it didn't. Nopony will ever know.


(I drew the cover art myself, in case you were wondering where it came from.)

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The ending is bringing me to tears. The message is amazIngly set. It was short, but beautiful.

I have never cried like this before in my life i'm just wowed it was great for such a short story :applecry: :fluttercry:

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I'm sorry it made you cry. But not really because that's what I wrote it for... I'm glad you liked it though.

Oh man...Is this a former oc? Because oh my god....it's so depressing yet I can't help but read every line of it...

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I actually created Eclipse Skies just to write this story. And I'm glad you liked it, though it was depressing.

It entrances the audience whom has been hurt,lost someone, and been in a horrible household...

No, it's fine! I love a good sadfic from time to time!:twilightsmile:

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Oh that's great! So you liked it?

Of course I liked it!:pinkiehappy:

I actually like this :pinkiecrazy:

I know people would call me insane but seriously it's the stuff I connect to.

(Yes, I know I'm insane, deranged, and a creepy, humanized, normal-looking rendition of some of the monsters from horror games, but don't judge.)

There is only one word to describe this fic:Amazing

7823627 why do you think I followed you?:pinkiehappy::trixieshiftright:

this will go to my favorites

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