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Yep. That about sums up my bike ride to work, though, "a driver" is a vast understatement.
I'm beginning to catch on to the style this is written. I will read more.
Like it, but something stands out like a rose in a dandelion patch to me- ALL your 'I's are capital. You only need to make an 'I' capital when it is either at the beginning of a sentence or on it's own. I'll and I'm are just contractions of 'I will' and 'I am' respectively, so those are the only exceptions to the rule.
Just saying
another minute In her and I would have snapped.vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/mlp/images/6/66/Rainbow_Dash_%26_Lightning_Dust_dang!_S3E7.png/revision/latest?cb=20121218013303 ouch, thats gotta hurt
6496108 I'm not the only one who caught that
Decently written first chapter... now let's look at the rest.
You have my attention!