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There are no more smiles. No more parties. No more fun times. All of that, taken away. One Element of Harmony is missing, lost in her own world. Is it possible to pull her out, or will Equestria have to find a replacement?
Can Ponyville survive without Pinkie Pie?
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I like where this is going, so keep up the good work, my friend.
5970142 Thanks!
5970360 No problem!
Is...this chapter supposed to be blank?
5982609 Um, no. Thanks for notifying me.
Awe..
Poor Pinkie..
*Sniffles* Aww, poor Pinki-Uh, I mean, poor Pinkamena. She needs one giant hug.
Pinkamena, I am not your friend (makes a teeny weeny lie to her) so I am going to give you a hug *hugs Pinkamena to try and make her feel better*
Oh my googily moogily, will this mean there is going to a sequel? Please, oh, please say there's going to be a sequel.
I really did enjoy reading this, it was fun and sweet. I have compared your first chapter with your final chapter, and I can say that you have improved greatly. Although there are a few minor mistakes, I would be more than happy to be your pre-reader and help you out.
So far so good. You need to brake up the large paragraphs, though.
Okay:
-You don't have to put commas or periods after somepony says something if the quotations are already there.
-You (normally) use italic when stating somepony's thoughts.
That's all, everything else is good.
What the hay?!?!
No hate I love the story but..............
they weren't even dating!!!!!!!!
What the buck was that
6503559 It wasn't much. Fanfictions don't have to stick to rules, remember?
By the way, I don't ship Cheese & Pinkie, or anypony else.
I liked this, well done