Equestrian has finally gotten to the young mage, and after failing in every possible way to enact spiteful revenge against Celestia and Luna, he finally cracks.
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Delmon
Seeing that date for how long I've had an account makes me feel old. Time sure does fly fast.
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So is that it.
I wanted him to whoop their butts
This story seems interesting.
5950572 I'm not quite sure myself. I am still not quite sure if i want to make this a one-shot, or continue it.
5951933 I certainly wouldn't mind a new chapter or two.
If it's just a one shot, then put it as complete, the incomplete sign is just a tease.
Really want more!
If thou continue this, we suggest he enters from somewhere else on the planet. Perhaps in the lands of Minotaurs? They could revere him as their Forerunner, or Griffonstone, or Zebrica, etc. Than perhaps around when the map appears giving the bearers a location of 'something is wrong here' only to meet him.
I must ask. How does this story deserve the sex tag?
You know, thus is the smartest villain I have seen. In the case of the world(or the essence of Harmony that runs it) being against you,
is really the most intelligent response. He gave it his best, and rather than "reforming", he recognized just how bullshit Equestria was against villains, and gtfo.