The year is 2168. Major Dovin has been sent by the Sol Alliance to investigate why a research and development lab on Mars has gone dark. Once he arrives there he discovers a device named "Contact", and that it has made a connection with a new world. Much to his despair though, a rebel faction has decided to make an attempt at conquering this new land. Will he be able to stop them in time to avoid an all out war?
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this seems good so far. I can't complain about anything so just keep doing what your doing and I can't wait for when your next chapter will come out. Good luck with college
and its dangerous to go into a college for that long alone so here take this:
845358Thanks! I really needed something like that! We started college one month earlier than most. We use this month for army basic training before the school year starts. I'm half way done with 3 weeks to go. I can't remember but I might have already started on the next chapter. Thanks for the watch!
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well, ive been slowly losing hope for you but i'll be keeping an eye on you just incase. i hope for the best for you while your in college though.