I hope to see a side story of my oc solar eclipse the black and red wolf you manged in chapter 4. His story is thsat Wen Twilight was passed as Twilight night. She killed his son and wife in front of him. He wants to destroy love in equestria

As much as I love the kids stories I still fangirl when we have Twidash moments. I miss those moments. Hopefully in the future we will see them again.

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Of course. This was just a small focus on Nighttide and Taz I wanted to write

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It was top notched. I enjoyed every minute of it and can't wait to see all of your future works. :)

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I have to say that this was a lot of fun to do, we've never done this before so It was an experience to write like this to say the least.

Although it wasn't all that well received (whether or not it was because of First person viewpoint IDK) So We'll probably keep it in 3rd from this point on.

How do you feel making it to the end?

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Honestly I enjoyed the first person. It allowed me to get to know the character a bit better. Feel what the character felt when they were sad or angry. I can understand why a lot of your fans didn't like it. They like getting to the good parts as fast as possible without having to really bond with your characters. Plus it's truely that. It's YOUR characters. We know Twilight and we have gotten to know Rainbow Dash, but getting to really know Nighttide and Taz was a whole new experience that we didn't get with Aurora, Dayspring, or Shimmering Night. I enjoyed it very much and by the end of it I was excited to see what comes next. :) I hope that answered your question.

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Yes it did, thanks!

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No problem. I was afraid I was babbling to much.

6237976 and one is just ridiculous

You gotta let me know what you think (of the whole thing) when you're done

I usually don't like first-person stories. But I read through every other single one of the TiM series stories, couldn't skip this one. It was.... I liked the story a lot, but the first-person bit still irked me. It was really nice to see a happy ending and one that didn't just lead straight into utter darkness! Yay! Now we just need the next one to come out haha.

Awe too bad it's over. When is the next set?

6359609 We hope to start it sometime in Oct.

Well this sums it up...
i.imgur.com/bUfr3Ee.png

saults

saluts.

I stopped walked forward

walking?

the check at

cheek.

This was just beautiful
And there's one little filly i wont to buck in the face, good point
Waiting for next

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Glad you like it.
I'll look over the errors once I'm home

I just spent the last 3 days reading all the stories in TiM. They are all amazing stories and I can't wait to read more stories from the authors involved in this.

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The new one is out, TiM: A Lesson Learned

Hmm... One thing I don't understand. While Nighttide did commit a 'crime', It was in Tartarus and not in Equestria. Whatever crime she commit doesn't matter, for in Tartarus there are no rules or laws. So Legally, Twilight has no power to punish Nighttide, no matter what she did, for she did not commit any crimes inside of Equestria.

Ps. 6587639 You are evil! I thought for a while that you gave up and weren't writing anymore! There was no chapter or anything pointing towards the stories being posted under a DIFFERENT Author!

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I always welcome stories written by other writers :) Especially when they're my co-writers lol.

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Hmm... One thing I don't understand. While Nighttide did commit a 'crime', It was in Tartarus and not in Equestria. Whatever crime she commit doesn't matter, for in Tartarus there are no rules or laws. So Legally, Twilight has no power to punish Nighttide, no matter what she did, for she did not commit any crimes inside of Equestria.

Foalnapping Taz from Equestria and taking him to Tartarus doesn't count?

She did do that. Even if he went along with it, it was under false pretenses. Much like a kid that gets in vain for candy and is then driven across state lines, that is a crime they could charge her with, even if her actions in Tartarus were beyond their jurisdiction.

The only reason Twilight wanted to know that is because the original crime could have been forgiven if not for her behavior down there.

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Could you please stop spamming?
It's nice to see you like the stories, but this is a bit... well, spam?

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Usually I would comment something about stallion's stamina and mare's awesomeness but hey, I promised Tavi to not talk bad about stallions without reason anymore

I thought Ana wanted him to be happy and was reconciled to it? Now she's gonna fight?

Taz is gonna end up with two wives, those two are both unstoppable.