You may hate my work, but give it a chance... and then you can nuke me.
Twilight was sure she didn't stand a chance with him. Flash was Certain that he wasn't good enough. That was the straw that Broke Shining's back as he played matchmaker... for a change, and set them up, unknowingly starting a whole series of events that would break his sister's heart and his subordinate's mind.
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That's funny. I wonder what is going to happen next. I guess we will see if shinning is ment to be a match maker or not.
Accidental uppercase....familiar,colt,guards,last,pegasus
(laughing) Duty.
5899205 ...Dammit Fatboi!
That was awesome. I love how That one guard was going to insult Twilight until he saw who she was. To be honest though, it would have been funnier if he did, and then saw it was twilight. Great job. Good luck with the next chapter.
Someone's going to get murphy'd!!!
Extra space.
All the sudden I want a hug. But there's no one to hug me.
That was a nice chapter. I liked it. Good luck with the next chapter. I love these date chapters.
Maybe their next date should go to Ponyville.
Technically, they said "murphy'd" not "murphied".
oh, and you need a space too.
Shut up and dance with me by walk the moon. Love that song!
(laughing) She said 'duty'.
Thanks for the update. I can't wait to see what happens when Flash goes to Ponyville for Vacation. Good luck with the next chapter.
6150150 did you say that so no one else would?
wait, you're writing a sequel when this one isnt complete?
6209099 Actually I wrote the sequel before I decided to write this, so consider it the "Halo Reach" of Fixing Flashlight.
A bit rushed but has a lot of potential.
Ummmm... I think rushed would be an under statement! Could of had more detail on the Kings rock thing. I still see potential in this story so keep trying.
You got my attention, that's for sure. Could use a little work on your story's pacing, but otherwise fine.
Next!