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God-Of-Toasters


My name is Abe, I like anthropology, religion, fantasy, the Cthulhu mythos, worldbuilding, metal and ponies. I consider fan fiction a tool to create better worlds and expand upon concepts.

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This story is a sequel to The Return of the Beastmaster


The days were many, but the lives were few...
After seeing too many crazy things, the Earth Pony warrior Bronze Tusk decides to travel to a small town and settle down. However, it seems that the town has its own problems.
Undead problems.
Comments are more than welcome, positive or negative.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 2 )

If you guys are down voting this, I would like to know what I can improve on for next time, thanks.

5993305 I have not read this, but word count is a strong deterrent. One chapter with 300 words, another with 700, and its complete... That means you skipped a lot of character/world building that needs to happen in a story. Even if we already know the characters like the backs of the extremities of our upper limbs, characterization is key.

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