Rainbow Dash has a dream. A dream to be Wonderbolt. It is also a dream that might get cut short because she just died. As she dies she meets Death(aka The Pale Pony) who cuts her a deal. She will give her some extra years of life to complete her dream if she does Death a favour.
Follow Rainbow Dash on weird journey to finish completing her dream and learn the true value of life and death, while also learn about the weird pony that is the Pale Pony.
(Warning this story contains: Death(unsurprisingly), implied sex, possible bad language, depression, mortality and weirdness. Ask a doctor before reading.)
Written by Dragon's Heart and co-written by my nuisance of a brother XYZDreadnought (Who also a grammar Nazi. Heil Oxford Dictionary). Also edited by my two pain in the ass Parents. Also proof read by Bugze(Thank you very much)
ALSO THIS IS NOT TRAGEDY! I DON'T DO THAT!
Also comments may contain spoilers.
What a series of missfortionate events
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I know right.
It is like some evil creature is manipulating fate and causing all this horrible things to happen... or it could be just some asehole behind a keyboard
Thanks for the comment!
Meh not a fan of the whole "make a deal with death to come back to life" thing. Once you're dead you're dead.
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But she was not completely dead.
Her soul just left her body.
And yes that is true once you're dead you're dead.
But I like to think she is undead, only breathing.
5913958 Well according to what you described she should be dead.
5913594 Technically Rainbow Wasn't quite dead yet, she was going, but not gone.
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Well if you can deal with my horrible writing.
Please wait for chapter 3.
It will fill in the gaps... hopefully
5913973 Well those Injuies should have been fatal.
5913983 She's on life support
This has great potential. I too wonder what the favor is.
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Probably not what you are thinking of
Dude! I didn't see that coming! Now Dash is stuck with the Death Pony in her house!
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Cool, that means i did my job right
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You most certainly did, you sneaky writer, you. Is Dash gonna be okay?
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Yeah.
Death would be breaking theirs deal if she kills or cripples her.
Fun. I like the concept that Death wants to feel 'alive' though. It certainly wasn't what I was expecting. There's a lot less doom than I thought, more adorable.
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That is nice to hear. I was kinda worried that people would dislike the whole want to experience being alive thing. But in the end it was the only thing I could imagine Death asking for. I mean what could Death want in the end.
XOX Dragon's Heart
Aww, I'm so sorry for your dog. I've had my share of pets who've died as well. Including our special bunny Drea.
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Thanks for your concern, sorry to hear about your bunny.
I have also lost a lot of pets, I think over 27.
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Wow...I can't remember the exactly number, but I think my family has also lost close to that number. In the space of a year, we lost 3 pets very dear to us...That was during my freshman year of high-school, and the summer following.
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Most of the pets my family have lost were chickens, followed closely by rats
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Ahh...For my family it's been cats that have died form old age, a guinea pig, a bunny, and several cats including strays. Some involving kittens who don't make it past 3 weeks. It was tragic.
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We have also lost 2 guinea pigs, 3 rabbits, 2 dogs, 8 rats, around 12 chickens.
Never lost a cat before cause we only just got one.
The saddest thing I have lost was when 2 wild baby rats or was it mice i saved from a bunch of bullies who were trying to kill them. One died the same day and the other one died a week later. Very sad
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Aww, I feel you. I hope you feel better. Losing a loved one is a terrible thing.
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You get used to it (Still cry when I think deeply about them
I have lost a lot of love ones.
It one reason I like to write Dark stories. That and my maladjusted childhood
Ah, the feeling of guilt, makes us wonder if death was alive at a time. That what she wants to feel from RD is just a mourning of what she lost by becoming death. Makes us wonder about her origin. Ahhh, curiosity.
An interesting tale. Is Twilight some how unaffected by the reality warping due to her being an alicorn and ageless?
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Well, she does seem to be less affect then everyone else...
or could it be something else and maybe she just doesn't like her?
Okay.....you have my attention....let's see if I isn't misplaced.
Hmm.....Okay, good so far.
Okay, you're doing an awesome job of this, it's actually heart breaking seeing that this doesn't have more comments about it.
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Wow, thanks
just one thing to point out that both you and your editor might have missed: the pale pony calls her an "aviator" of loyalty. an aviator is a person who flies a plane, i think the work you were looking for is "avatar."
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............. DAMN SPELL CORRECTOR
Thank you for pointing it out
Hope you still enjoy my story
Uh oh, someone might try to collect Dash without knowing her deal with Mors!
Well, at least Mors can explain this.