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Thundersword is the son of two very important ponies in the Crystal Empire but when he meets a mare whom he discovers he has feelings for, he begins to wonder what she will think of him if she knows whom he's related too? This story is a collaboration with https://www.fimfiction.net/user/Stellar+Blaze
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I found several spelling and grammatical errors in the story. Sorry about this, but I hope it might help.
I think the sentence should probably look like this, "It was a beautiful sunny day in the Crystal Empire, and all was bright. We see two ponies in the dining room. One was a white unicorn stallion, and the other a pink alicorn."
The stallion had a shield with a star for a cutie mark, and the alicorn had what seemed to be a heart of crystal as hers.
Their names were Shining Armor and Princess Mi Amore Cadenza, also known as Princess Cadence. They were having a nice breakfast and conversation about their son, Thunder Sword, and his first Crystal Fair.
There are also a lot more minor mistakes other than these. I can help fix these mistakes if you would like.
6737001 yeah if u want to edit thats fine
6737001 yeah you can proof read the chapters and i can fixthem
6813173 Sure. May I have a link so I can help edit?
6814619 your on the story