... There isn't much I can say after reading that... Not much at all honestly... I am a "LUNA IS BEST PONY" fan and after reading this I feel... Sad. Your fic has made me sad. I want more Luna and less Celestia. That hurt reading that Celestia had broken anything special between Twilight and Luna, it honestly did. I would like for this fic to go on, but please, let there be a time when it isn't just about desire. I clicked this for Shipping, witch on this site is called romance, and in that there is supposed to be a meaningful relationship. So please, let Luna be happy and at peice with her desires with the pony she loves. Aside with how I felt about the actual pairings, you wrote one damn good fic. Aloe and Lotus? Who knew. So you are truly talented at writing, though while two ponies are 'at it' there is always something sadistic or twisted going on, it was written damn good. I hope that you continue it, but please at least consider Luna ending up happy.
29598 I understand you, and you might have seen that even if my stories are grimdark and kinda brutal, they usually end up with a happy ending. I can also add that Luna is one of my favorites, and I'm sure you are gonna like my ending to the current plot in Royal Pleasures ^^ Or maybe not....
I think the foul language kind of ruins it, but hay, write it however you see fit. I love it when people can collaborate both kinds of plot in stories, it's truly wonderful.
oooooh these stories , now i remember , yeah i must have read all of this already on your da so very long ago , the latest i recall this going was them beating the crazy lust goddess out of twi and her not remembering any of it then luna sexing twi again being happy to 'take her virginity for the second time'
has this gotten any further then that? well im about to go look.....
Luna walked out on the balcony from her and Celestia's bedroom, her duty as the princess of night called. But before she decided to raise the moon, she gazed a one last time on the light her sister's sun brought to the fields around Canterlot. To think that something the ponies of Equestria always took for granted was in her grasp always taunted her to be a little prankster.
Loved it. Love to see more.
... There isn't much I can say after reading that... Not much at all honestly... I am a "LUNA IS BEST PONY" fan and after reading this I feel... Sad. Your fic has made me sad. I want more Luna and less Celestia. That hurt reading that Celestia had broken anything special between Twilight and Luna, it honestly did. I would like for this fic to go on, but please, let there be a time when it isn't just about desire. I clicked this for Shipping, witch on this site is called romance, and in that there is supposed to be a meaningful relationship. So please, let Luna be happy and at peice with her desires with the pony she loves. Aside with how I felt about the actual pairings, you wrote one damn good fic. Aloe and Lotus? Who knew. So you are truly talented at writing, though while two ponies are 'at it' there is always something sadistic or twisted going on, it was written damn good. I hope that you continue it, but please at least consider Luna ending up happy.
29598 I understand you, and you might have seen that even if my stories are grimdark and kinda brutal, they usually end up with a happy ending. I can also add that Luna is one of my favorites, and I'm sure you are gonna like my ending to the current plot in Royal Pleasures ^^ Or maybe not....
did luna let trixie have twighlight for the night and your so mean to my queen (luna) and did just learn how to fuck so good
Mr. Hank hill. If you would please.
"BWAAAAH!!!"
Thank you.
*puts gun to face*
I didn't like this one as much...
not that it was poorly written, just not my cup of tea.
I think the foul language kind of ruins it, but hay, write it however you see fit. I love it when people can collaborate both kinds of plot in stories, it's truly wonderful.
I really enjoyed this one. good work
I loved this story it was so lustrous it was almost grindmark!
oooooh these stories , now i remember , yeah i must have read all of this already on your da so very long ago , the latest i recall this going was them beating the crazy lust goddess out of twi and her not remembering any of it then luna sexing twi again being happy to 'take her virginity for the second time'
has this gotten any further then that? well im about to go look.....