This story is a sequel to Rise of Pinkamena: Book 2
This story is gonna be edited.
Pinkamena has been missing for a year. No pony has seen or heard from her. But a good things end sometimes.
Thank you to Swirl H Discordia for improving and editing
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Please stop.
5835992 why
You might want to spellcheck your description there.
5836047 Your grammar's awful, the storyline is edgy, and most people who frequent these badfics will downvote immediately after seeing the word Pinkamena. In short, your story's crap.
5836047 Because you need help for ALL of your stories--editors, pre-readers, and Google docs. Please use them; otherwise, only people with standards about as high as my pinky toe is big will read and like them. Sorry for sounding like a total bitch from the pits of Hell, but that's the truth.
Seek help. It can be found. And with that help, you'll be a better writer.
5836162 can you help me dragonborne
5836171 The Proofreader group, the people who will look over your story and state their thoughts.
Looking for Editors, who will help you with grammar, plot, dialogue and descriptions.
Google Docs. Open up another six or so documents, put ALL of your stories in them (one per doc), click the "share" option, and hit the Proofreader and Looking for Editors groups for help. PM the sharable links to those who take up your offer.
See your getting alot of hate here. I'd love to help out, just not today cos I'm heading to bed
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5836179 how can I share I've only been on here for a few mouths. so i'm new at this
5836200 You can make threads in the forums, saying "Hey, I'm looking for [editors/proofreaders] for all of my stories. I am using Google Docs for each one, so you'll have to PM me for sharable links." Have the titles say "I need help for all my stories." You're welcome.
5836197 okay, now THAT'S edgy. Who is she and how soon can I seduce her awesomeness?
...unless that's a guy, then... Awkward...
5836463 what the hell are you talking about
5836482 Shadowblaze's comment.
5836463
Fairly certain it's a guy. Sorry to crush your dreams my friend.
5836724 Well, now i've got some thoughts to bleach from my brain...
5836728
Here's some.
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Oh, wait, wrong bleach.