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Just Another Day

The story follows a day in reflection for Rutted Trails, a plain old earth pony who has the extreme displeasure of living in the most dangerous town in all of Equestria, Ponyville.

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DevilDog

DevilDog #1 · May 12th, 2012 · · ·

Well my first attempt at Fanfiction, hope its not too terrible!

Always wondered what it would be like to just be a regular pony living in Ponyville, considering its like the HUB of natural disasters and evil forces wanting to destroy all of Equestria.

Lucky Roll

Lucky Roll #2 · May 12th, 2012 · · ·

I found the jokes and generally the idea behind the fic actually pretty good!

However, you should ask someone to help you proofreading before you upload your works. There were numerous grammar and formal mistakes which made the overall quality rather poor.

Griffin2x

Griffin2x #3 · May 12th, 2012 · · ·

Why is it anyone lives in Ponyville? its seems to be a disaster magnet, its a half an hours from a forest of nasties, like 2 hours from a place called ghastly gorge which has such a lovely name, and less than a days run from the very gates of hell. Property values must suuuuuck. Its like living in the Candyland version of Silent Hill. Anyhoo good chapter.

DevilDog

DevilDog #4 · May 12th, 2012 · · ·

Eheh, yeah Grammer is my greatest enemy.
I did have someone look it over for me before I posted it, but some still slipped through the cracks.
Hopefully I can go back and edit it.