Supernova

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This story is a sequel to Andromeda Rising

Death within. Read responsibly.

There is a hefty price for becoming a planar being, and it comes in the form of watching everything you love die. When Andromeda outlives her homeworld in its entirety, she must cause the sun to go supernova and destroy everything she's loved for so long to keep the balance of the universe.

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Shogoki

Shogoki #1 · Apr 2nd, 2015 · · ·

"Sitting back on her haunches"

Ponies don't sit on their haunches, rumps, or butts, they sit on the ground, on a couch, on a bed, on a cushion etc.

Sitting implies resting your weight that part of your anatomy, otherwise you're standing or laying. This applies to humans, cats, dogs, and of course, ponies.

Noir de Plume

Noir de Plume #2 · Apr 7th, 2015 · · 1 ·

5812322 Psssst. Fanfiction.

Shogoki

Shogoki #3 · Apr 8th, 2015 · · ·

5836665

I don't think pointing out a simple misuse of a verb is dissing the writer, feedback is usually appreciated and I did not down vote this story for such a minor thing.

Papa Dragon