It's been eight months since the CMC left Michael, and for Michael, things have returned to normal. Many things in his life changed, now the legal guardian of his two younger sisters Michael gets a meeting that'll change his life for the better.
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Maybe I forget, I dont know. But...
WHERE IS SPIKE!?!?!?
6870300 probably forgot but Spike is with Sweetie on a tour, he's her manager
Marble is the youngest sister of de the Pie family.
WHAT?! Maud is part of Big Mac's harem?? How did THAT happen??
6870759 Big Mac. Big like rock.
6904023 I didn't ask why, I asked how. As far as I know, Big Mac never met Maud until 'Hearthwarmers'.
6904088 at this point in the story it's been almost 6 or 7 years since the CMC were fillies. I'm estimating they were 11-12 years old when the show happens. And they're currently 19 so between that time characters would meet each other make connections things like that.
6904781 ... I'm such a dunce.
what fluttershy friends think once she told them?
Okay.... two things.
1.Swap the word harem with herd. It's appropriate and sounds more like a family relationship than an orgy club.
2. You've been visible improving. Honestly, the first one had me cringing and was hard to read, but this is palatable. Given the timespan of improvement you might be able to skip editing.