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The Freedom of the Night

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Scootareader #1 · Mar 28th, 2015 · · ·

Wow, still no comments? That's ridiculous.

This was pretty artsy-feeling; it had nice prose, and the description wasn't too heavy or too light. It had a dreamy feeling, like Braeburn couldn't quite believe what was happening, but it was happening all the same.

Not bad at all, especially considering your other work. This one gets a pass from me.

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Cool Doritos Locos Taco #2 · Mar 28th, 2015 · 1 · ·

5794192
awesome, it was a lot of energy to make, and I hoped to please.

Thanks.

Dank Pit

Dank Pit #3 · Mar 29th, 2015 · · ·

odd lu-burn story, but still a great story.

linksbro1 #4 · Mar 29th, 2015 · · ·

Oh wow

This is... not sure what the word is, but I'm going to say 'poetically beautiful'

I never thought someone could make clop sound just as sophisticated as Shakespeare.

In other words I fukkin loved it.

Voiceguy

Voiceguy #5 · Apr 2nd, 2015 · · ·

Not enough anal vore

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Cool Doritos Locos Taco #6 · Apr 2nd, 2015 · · ·

Aww snap, thanks man. I thought my story would be too niche for a reading, but you proved me wrong.

Voiceguy

Voiceguy #7 · Apr 2nd, 2015 · · ·

5812340 Literally nothing is too niche for a reading.

Exaecatio #8 · Apr 10th, 2015 · · ·

Doesn't the proofreader get any cookies for making the story suck a slight bit less?

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Cool Doritos Locos Taco #9 · Apr 13th, 2015 · · ·

oooh, awesome, thanks man.

Alticron

Alticron #10 · Apr 23rd, 2015 · · ·

There's a certain problem I noticed, there are several time when Braeburn is referred to as a female instead of male.

The strong Braeburn would do anything for her Princess, and seeing her so happy made him elated more than any usual pony.

With a spasm, Braeburn released a copious amount of seed into her lover's mouth.

Braeburn lets go, teasing her mate with such a good meal from somepony who could feed thousands of foals with those two.

That last one's really confusing because it makes it seem like Luna's suckling on Braeburn instead of the other way around.

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