• Member Since 25th Oct, 2011
  • offline last seen Jun 7th, 2015

Jaiden


Some dude who likes mlp

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Faith - A parkour specialist. Jumping from building to building without fault and without loosing speed, lands herself in the busy city manehattan.

Can she escape pursuers? Can she get to someone that will help?

(Contains swearing and guns.)

Beware, i am listening to music as i write this. Pray that it is calm music or something bad might happen :P

Second story! Wish me luck!

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 8 )

Yeah i like how people favourite the story, yet nobody has read it.

READ THE STORY PEOPLE! :fluttercry:

Me want more now...:raritycry: Why must chapters end so quickly!?:raritycry:

582390 Be lucky that chapter wasn't 1k words Xd

Actually, scratch what i said before, the stats are lying. :facehoof:

The story seems really good, actually. The only problem I see is that the writing style is a bit... flawed. It's not too bad, but here's a hint: Most people signify a scene change with a horizontal rule, or


Other than that, brilliant! Here, take a mustache! :moustache:

James bond reference in this one. See if you can grab it.

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