• Published 2nd Apr 2015
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Dear Sister - xoxPinkiePiexox



Scootaloo tries her hardest to bond with her sister, Rainbow Dash.

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"She's still asleep?" Rainbow Dash whispered.

"Aw! She's so cute!" Pinkie Pie whispered excitedly.

"I hope she is still ok," Fluttershy said.

Scootaloo slowly opened her eyes to see Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, and Fluttershy, then closed them again. "Five more minutes, Luna," she muttered.

"What do you think she is dreaming of?" Fluttershy asked.

"I don't know but I am getting impatient," Rainbow Dash said, "Maybe we should wake her up."

"No, we should let her sleep," Pinkie said.

Scootaloo slowly opened her eyes again and stared until her vision was clear. "Ah!" Scootaloo yelled as she jumped up.

"Rise and shine!" Pinkie Pie said excitedly, "We have a busy day."

"Doing what?" Scootaloo asked.

"We're going to take you to Ponyville Hospital so they can check your wing," Fluttershy said.

Rainbow Dash noticed the poster of herself on the wall. "Hey what is this?"

Scootaloo rushed to the poster to take it down. "Oh! Nothing important!"

"If you say so, lets just get you to the hospital."
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At the hospital, Scootaloo sat in the bed waiting for the results of her test. Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie stared at the wall impatiently as if trying not to explode. Seconds later Nurse Redheart came through the door. "I have the test results! It appears that Scootaloo does have a sprained wing. She should stay home and get plenty of rest."

"You heard it first from the doc! Go home and get plenty of rest! I will be over to bring cupcakes later!" Pinkie Pie said excitedly before bouncing out of the room.

"I also need to go too. I should go check on Angel," Fluttershy said before leaving the room.

"Do you need me to stay with you while you recover?" Rainbow Dash asked.

Scootaloo's eyes widened. "Oh! My! Gosh! You will do that for me?" Scootaloo said excitedly.

"Of course, anything for my little sister."

Rainbow Dash walked with Scootaloo back to the clubhouse. Sweetie Belle and Applebloom were already inside.

"There you are!" Applebloom said excitedly as Scootaloo and Rainbow Dash walked inside.

"Scoots, you should stay here while I go get some food," Rainbow Dash said.

"Wait! Can't you stay here?" Scootaloo begged.

"Sorry squirt, but I have to go unless you want to stay hungry."

"I guess you are right," Scootaloo said as Rainbow Dash flew out the door.

"What happened to being cool?" Applebloom asked.

"It just isn't fair," Scootaloo admitted. "She's the most awesome pony and I can never get a chance to hang out with her for more than 5 minutes."

"I'm sure you will have time to hang out with her one day," Sweetie Belle said reassuringly.

"But when? She's always flying and my wings can't even get me three feet in the air."

"You will be able to fly soon," Applebloom said. "Don't you think you are trying too hard?"

"What happened to doing whatever it takes to get our cutie marks?"

"We will get them soon, but we can't hurt ourselves trying to get them either," Sweetie Belle said.

"Lately it seems like you guys don't care anymore." Scootaloo said as she turned away from the two. "If you aren't going to help me get my cutie mark, or fly, then I am just going to have to work harder."

"Don't push yourself too much," Sweetie Belle said worried.

"Without you!" Scootaloo said as she pushed Applebloom and Sweetie Belle out the door. Scootaloo slowly began to cry again at the feeling of being alone.

Author's Note:

This isn't my strongest dialogue. But I did my best. Just thought it would be nice to focus a little in Scootaloo's struggles.

I made a few edits to the chapters to fix some of the dialogue. I also needed to change some of the dialogue altogether.

Comments ( 5 )

Great story!:twilightsmile:

Just a tad rushed. My opinion though.

Short and sweet, if not a little sad. But we all need a good dose of sad. :raritywink: Plus...that line

raining Scootaloos, that's what

:coolphoto: Gets an upvote from me

Oh, by the way, might I ask why this has a romance tag?

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It was there for sisterly love but lately I had writer's block for this one so I might remove it. Thanks for reminding me. :twilightsmile:

5929828 Gotta love that sisterly love. :twilightsmile: While I admit I find it weird for sister love to qualify as 'romance', I searched the word and the definition was 'a feeling of excitement and mystery associated with love', so I stand corrected.

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