Princess Luna and Celestia have recently returned from an extended trip to Saddle Arabia. But things are not going well for the princess of the night. With the help of Twilight, Spike and his daughter Gem and a sarcastic and non-trusting Keba Moonshard <My OC). They along with princess Luna must decide what is worth more. Protecting Luna's secrete or risking the return of Nightmare Moon.
Inspired by Children of the night (PMV) https://youtu.be/jW5n3k2VgZE
This is my very first story ever but I've wanted to put this out there for a long time a majority of my wanting to wright this story is to give my oc's a background or a base point of other story ideas I have.
Cover art is Owned by respective artist.
Chapters (5)
This idea has promise. I will have to read it later.
I'll keep an eye on this, but honestly it's currently way too hard for me to read right now. I don't want to sound like a grammar addict, but if Twilight actually did read this she'd probably react badly. Well like you said, everyone starts somewhere. I hope I'm there to enjoy your writing when it happens.
5771865 yeah I get the grammar thing a lot, something I have to work on if I find an editor I do a re upload at some point thx for the feed back.
Just out of interest what did you type this on?
6195861 straight on the website, why?
6197893 Because maybe if you typed it on something that had spell check, then at least it would come out with some autocorrect options.
6197967 it dose have spell check i thought i caught them all.
A good principal. You should keep it in moderation though, some people criticize, but that can be because they care. Differentiate them from the trolls.
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