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Not sure what to say... I personally feel like Xerves death was a bit rushed, then again with the Evil Knife being what may say "overpowered" I guess his death was inevitable as soon as he showed himself.
In reveiw of this chapter I think the reason why I feel Xerves death was rushed is because I personally expected more of the assassin, so beyond expressing caution on how the knife is used to kill in the furture, I look forward to reading what happens next, be it here or "Tales of Chicacolt". On separate note, your style in writing when Starry and Lightning are separated is nicely done.
All in all I really enjoyed this chapter and wonder what the next challenge for this group of friends is going to be.
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We may not have seen the very last of Xerves, as this whole experience is going to have a very profound effect on Starry, mentally.
Regardless, he did need to die. You will find out very soon in the next chapter why he perished so easily.
Also, thanks! I had a lot of fun writing both Starry and Lightning's perspective.
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Look forward to it. Hope your healing up well.
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I am for sure, thanks! Things are starting to feel like normal again.
Well a part of me can understand her pleasure of tearing him apart, a very dark and angry part hidden deeply in the subconcious.
Yummy.