Twilight sparkle and her friends, the elements of harmony has stop nightmare moon. But not for good, as her shadow follows twilight and friends, seeking a new host for her reign over equstria. Will the elements of harmony able to fight nightmare moon's influences, or they will fall into darkness.
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Hello my little nightmares, I am glad to see my first story turned out well. I will made changes to the story and/or cover to be best fited. It will take time to get these chapters out , but I, your queen of the night shall do my very best to get this story out.
-Nightmare of the Moon
Chapters (2)
Interesting potiental, I'm watching this.
But you may want to get an editor; I get the feeling English isn't your first language. English structures sentences in a kind of odd way, and it's hard to pick up. If you just get an editor to clean up the grammar, you'd be great.
5805732 English is my first language, but I usually use short sentence and this is my first story. Plus I am doing this on the phone. However I will take your advice. Any you can recommend.
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Um don't write stories on your phone, and...well, the way this reads is pretty bad. There's not really any one bit of advice I can give you for this.
5805811 don't worry I write it down on paper then on phone. Sadly I don't have a computer to do this. However I will admit not my best work. But I'll do my best with what I have.