All is normal in Equestria until one day a new face trots into ponyville. His name is Strummer Crescendo, a guitar playing music pony. But Twilight Sparkle senses much more than meets the eyes...
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Lighting Twister
Everyday I wake up and blast out my front door via and 18th century cannon. There's not much you need to know about me, but I'm an open book if you feel like asking.
Lighting Twister
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Took me a while, I found a few errors, but loved it
572082 There are many errors. Grammatical errors and the story is missing some important elements. I should have revised before posting it, but it's my first fanfiction so mistakes are to be expected. Especially since I wrote and posted it so hastily. I'm thinking about re-writing it and then posting it again. I very much appreciate that people have enjoyed it despite these factors. Everyponies support is very inspiring.
Errors. But a soft story. I was like DANG IT TWILIGHT! WTF. Anyway, soft story. Godspeed and goodluck.
578374 soft story? I'm afraid I don't quite understand.
586990 Soft isn't sad. Well not sad enough to make you cry. It's soft. Not hard like a rock or fluffy like a feather. It's soft.
This is the third story i have read that involved Twilight ruining one of Fluttershy's relationships. Why is this so common? haha
Well, its a good concept, but a fairly bad delivery. The dialogue feels very wooden and flat. Especially at the start between Spike & Twilight. Honestly, I wasn't able to read much of this due to that. The entire story is very wooden, very telling without much show at all... sorry, but the delivery of this is simply too bad for me not to thumb's down.
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Yeah, looking back at it it's pretty bad. But hey, first attempts are always rough.
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True enough.
I don't like it, sorry
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