When a young medic plummets to his "death" in the mountains of Afghanistan, he lands in the orchids of Sweet Apple Acres. Will he be able to adapt to his new life and put his past behind him? Or will the ghosts of his past break him?
the transformer exploded and a massive electrical fire engulfed the building
You're missing a word in there.
good story line, however, you might want to go back and redo parts where it moves at the speed of light.
Short chapter...... I like the story so far though. *plot intensifies*
6102913 Don't worry, this is only the tip of the iceberg with the emerging threat.
Holy crap did they just kill rarity.
6168613 Read the previous chapter
the transformer exploded and a massive electrical fire engulfed the building
You're missing a word in there.
good story line, however, you might want to go back and redo parts where it moves at the speed of light.
Short chapter...... I like the story so far though. *plot intensifies*
6102913 Don't worry, this is only the tip of the iceberg with the emerging threat.
Holy crap did they just kill rarity.
6168613 Read the previous chapter