• Member Since 20th Jun, 2013
  • offline last seen Wednesday

Test4Echo


"When the dust has cleared, and victory denied; a summit too lofty, river a little too wide. If we keep our pride, though paradise is lost, we will pay the price, but we will not count the cost."

T

Sunset was just trying to show the school that she was reformed. What easier way to do that than by giving a tour to new students? After she shows three new students -- who act very strangely around her -- around, she begins to wonder if there's something more to those three when she keeps bumping into them left and right.


Inspired and expanded upon of Wubcake's first Rainbow Rocks parody.

Thanks once more to my awesome friend and pre-reader, AShadowOfCygnus for getting to this so quickly.

Cover image done by me, since I couldn't find any good cover art for this, and I also love Aria's line in the video.

Alternate universe tag for the fact that the Dazzlings aren't evil, amongst other things.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 26 )

It was fun, it was silly, and I enjoyed it.

Sequel please.:rainbowlaugh::pinkiehappy:

"Great," Sunset thought as she started walking down the hall. "That much harder to convince them I've changed."

Small point, but most writers use single quotes (') instead of double quotes (") for thoughts.

5697522 Thanks for the tip, but if you look through my other stories, they all have that as well. It's a personal style choice, and I've made sure that I distinguish enough between dialogue and internal monologue.

5697073 5697313 Thanks. Glad you liked it!:twilightsmile:

5697414 Well, I have an outline for a story based off of one of Wubs' ideas in her latest parody video, so I could easily set it in the same continuity as this. Glad you liked it, by the way.:twilightsmile:

Rush and Pony on!
T4E

Have you ever considered submitting this story to Equestria Daily? You can find out how to do so here.

5701409 I'm impressed that you think this would be good enough to get on EqD. However, if I remember their submitting rules, no human stories (unless it's HiE) are allowed. I'll think it over, regardless, though.

Rush and Pony on!
T4E

Thank you so much XD I loved it, loved the "Shimmerlings" <3

5701656 You're very welcome, Wubs. :twilightsmile: It was great fun reading it with you.

Rush and Pony on!
T4E

I would probably do the exact same thing if I had the chance to meet Harry Potter...or Bella or Edward...

This was just plain old crazy. And I needed that! Thanks. :twilightsmile:

5728789 Glad that you enjoyed it. Always happy when someone's day is lightened by one of my stories.:twilightsmile:

Rush and Pony on!
T4E

"Shimmerlings?" "Razzle my dazzle?"

THAT'S IT THIS IS THE BEST STORY EVER! :rainbowlaugh:

5861391 I'm glad you enjoyed it so thoroughly. :twilightsmile: I can't take credit for "Razzles my dazzle", that's all Wubcake. :raritywink:

Rush and Pony on!
T4E

5710674

I'd do the opposite if I met Bella or Edward.

"You...!" *Goes to chemistry lab* "There is no hope, no salvation, except through killing it with fire!"

This was strange but perfect on so many levels.

And it really deserves a sequel. :scootangel:

6004319 Glad you liked it! :twilightsmile: When you're adapting something originally done by Wubcake, things can get a bit weird. :applejackconfused: Fun to write and expand, though. A sequel will come eventually, when I have the motivation (which is something that I'm lacking at the moment. :raritycry:).

Rush and Pony on!
T4E

Hahaha! Made my day! :rainbowlaugh:

That was weirder than expected.

6451054 This is based off of one of Wubcake's videos, strangeness is the norm. :derpytongue2:

Rush and Pony on!
T4E

Yeah, I would probably do the same thing.:rainbowlaugh:

Minus the breaking into her house and watching her shower though, that was just creepy.

Shimmerlings FTW!!

Sonata screamed through the door, "Have my babies!"

...Is it bad that I thought Sunset somehow siring children with the Dazzlings would be cute as all get-out?

Bruh xD I couldn't stop laughing

Login or register to comment