Year after year, Crystal Prep's Shadowbolts have won the Friendship Games, an inter-school competition. This year, however, Sunset Shimmer, Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, and the rest of the girls are ready to win!
When a new competitor takes the field, the girls are thrown off guard. And not just because she's been stealing their hair. This girl bears a strong resemblance to one of their best friends, and she's planning something sinister.
(Thanks to Tennis Match Fan for help with the synopses!)
Wow! That's a really great start! Can't wait for more!!
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Thank you! More coming soon!
5683054 No problem! YAY!
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Woo-hoo!
5683059 AWESOME!!
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I could do this all day.
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5683069 Same here!!
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BTW, more chapters are coming soon... don't worry.
5683100 SO EXCITED!!!
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It might actually be up tomorrow, chapter 3. Who knows?
5683151 YAY!
Awesome job
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Thank you! Now if only I had a good enough description...
5683173 It is, don't worry, I just can't wait till they see that Human Twilight is one of the Shadowbolt's, should be very tough for them
Are you basing this off of the upcoming movie? If so then I applaud your effort to no end!
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You have no idea. ;)
5683198 Sweet. And will the chapters get longer each time?
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Probably. I already have the rough drafts of chapters 3 and 4 planned out, they are about 3 pages long, back-to-back. I will expand on them too, add more detail.
5683209 Awesome
5683209 I can't wait for the next one :D
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Me too. :)
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Yes I am! And thank you. :)
I loved t when is more going to be up
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Chapter 3 will hopefully be up today. And thank you!
Yay I just submitted a story myself hopefully I gets posted
Cool so far, but... you do know the Shadowbolts have confirmed appearances, and Sunny's hair is purple and magenta, right?
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Oh! Oops! Sorry. I have no idea why I made her have purple and blue hair! I'll fix that right now.
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Fixed it.
5686235 Hooray!
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I can't believe I had actually forgotten that , though. It was pretty obvious that her hair was purple and magenta and not purple and blue! I must have confused her with Sugarcoat or something.
5686273 Probably!
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Oh, well. We always make mistakes.
And now it's time for dinner for me! XD
Well, Pinkie and Sunset spotted her, can't wait to see everyone else's reactions
5686294 Good! It's time for me to panic about the homework I've haven't done.
Is Human Twilight looking to crush what she thinks is her arch enemy? Cause I could get into that
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Oops. Good luck!
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I have no idea.
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Coming soon hopefully!
5686797 Thanks!
Awesome chapter!!
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Thanks!
5693637 NP!
WOAH! Human Twilight is a good actor!
she's smart but she's not that good an actor. twi needs work.
also the story has fast pacing, just the very basic details, and no real fill to it
i like the idea and premise. i REALLY look forward to the movie in the fall but...this needs work
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...Oh cud Futtershy!
...Wow...just wow.
Great Chapter, can't wait to see more!!!
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Thank you. :)
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I guess so.
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Thank you for the feedback. I tried to fill in a few parts but I have a bit of trouble expanding a story... I'm only used to writing short ones.
I'm really looking forward to the movie too.
Can't be what?! You can't leave us there!