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5681416 oop! Thanks!
So far... glorious! Cant wait for more.
LOVE IT! my god great writing does not die! cant wait for more, heres a like, fave, watch, EVERYTHIGN!
Now if that is not an amazing and promising premise, I do not know what is. I will greedily await more of this, as well as your other stories!
Love this, Cody! I praise you and our dear Taelea for a job well done so far! You guys make a great; no, make that an excellent team!
Consider this Especially Special Favorited, Followed and Up-voted, sweetlings! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Oh, and give our dear friend our good wishes and love, okay? We miss her, and can't wait for her to be back with us.
And not a single down-vote on this! Excellent!
5681655 Hey, what can I say? I'm just awesome that way.
Seriously, though, I absolutely adore Taelea's stories, and this one, done in collab with her friend Cody, is great.
That's why the majority of hers wind up in my Especially Special Favorites Bookshelf. They're that good.
*Flight of the Valkyries starts playing*
5681775 Indeed.
Well!
This certainly has my attention. There are a number of minor grammar glitches, but nothing too distracting to the story. I also think your stand in "/" instead of an italics tag is hurting you a bit...
The speech at the beginning felt a little forced, but so do most presidential speeches, so I can't fault you there.
I do think that the pacing may be a bit fast, I think the arrival would have been far more poignant had we seen more of the Equestrian side of the conflict before they got the message. I think a full chapter of struggling Equestria would have been worthwhile.
Anyways, I look forward to where this story goes from here.
YOu better continue this cause Im telling you right now. *Turns and looks behind me as my Forgotten Forest Chatroom starts to go to Combat Alert* Cause the Humans arent the ONLY ones ready to respond!!!!!!
Now THIS is a story I can like!
hmm this has grabbed my interest hopefully humanity comes out on top!
Can't wait for the next chapter. as pinkie would say, I'm so nervouscited
this particular quote reminds me of this scene from the movie Independence day
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When I looks for stories where Humans and Ponies meet, THIS is what I look for! Thank you!
When I first saw this story I thought "Hmm this may be interesting."
I'm glad I read it.
5681775 I can one up that.
"To the Princesses of Equestria, and to all those still alive. I do not know if you can hear this message. But if you can, just hold on. Humanity is on its way."
YEEEAAHHHHH! Humanity comes to Equestria to kick alien ass and finally meet their pony friends. I expect much heroic pony saving, hugs, and pony petting...
I think I'll keep an eye on this. Looks promising.
--Spade
This story is similar to an idea I had with interstellar war with humans and ponies as allies. If this turns out the way I picture it, this is gonna be the most badass story I will have ever read. So far I loved this chapter, I felt a smidge of adrenaline reading this, my blood pressure went up, it got hard to breathe lol, this story is legit!
"Worry not, children of Equus, the Space Battleship Yamato is here to save the day!"
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This is looking to be pretty damn epic. Can't wait to see what an army of one BILLION humans can do.
Also, that president's appearance... white hair, goatee... Discord!?
You know, I saw this story when it was first posted, and I passed it up. It looked good, but I've been let down by too many stories that had good premises.
Then I saw it in the feature box, and I still passed it up, because it's let me down even more than the new stories list has.
But eventually I caved and read it anyway, and it was definitely worth it. That was one hell of a first chapter. If the rest of the story is as good as this chapter, you guys will have one hell of a story on your hands. I noticed a few errors here and there, but nothing too egregious, so keep up the good work.
5684699 It is. :3 I would like to thank everyone who helped this story get in the featured box so quickly! Also, Taelea, the author, is transgender. One of her life's dreams is to have some kind of miracle potion that could make her fully female in body so... yeah. XD Go magic?
MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
As a sci-fi fan, i need more.
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And what the hell is the sex tag doing there...
You have nothing to apologize for, hon. You and he are doing an excellent job with this story, and when I found out about your accident, and what you've been going through since, I consider him as much a friend as I do you. He's just being your hands right now, and I love him for being such a wonderful friend to you.
(You ought to try to get him to get his own account here, if he doesn't have one.)
And on the note of your accident, you just worry about getting better as much as your writing, okay? We love you, and we're pulling for you. *hugs*
But on a story-note, you two...give them lousy Seraphs hell!!!
5684739 It started off iffy, then it got cheesy, you nearly lost me....
but I pushed on, struggled....
...till the end, which was actually decent, good job.
Ah, yes. We need more humans and ponies (or any friendly aliens, really [and not all humanoids, damn it]) being badasses together stories.
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Oh hi there.
I would already very much like for a human to brutally beat a Seraph to death. Amazing work, I hope you get better soon!
nigga it's earth
5688244 Which, coincidentally, is the same thing. If I recall correctly, Terra is Latin for Earth which the English language borrows very heavily from. A lot of the worlds different languages have a different word for Earth; only in your language is it exclusively Earth.
Best speech I've ever seen. 10/10
"Humanity is on its way." I love this story!
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That's really interesting. I never actually knew it was called "Terra" in a certain language or whatever.
To the authors, this is actually quite a good story so far. Well done.
That's my name! Woot!
The second line here might have more effect if he literally hadn't just said "begging" before. You should probably change "begging" to "asking" in first line I quoted.
I know it's minor, but .
You know, they'd probably say the same thing. To them the cancer cure is (probably) nothing - just like some of our current tech will be in a few decades.
Kind of reminded me of Hackett's rallying speech from Mass Effect 3.
The Yamato? I see what you did there, lol. Not many bother with obscure naval history like that, but I can definitely appreciate it
Also, very well-written thus far. The president's speech was perhaps a little awkward, but closing with the message to Equus was an excellent narrative choice. I very much look forward to seeing the form that these invaders take, and how humanity will turn the war around.
Humanity? F**k yeah!!
5692294 right
5690150 Terra, if I remember right, is Latin for earth, dirt, ground, etc
A billion, though? I mean that just seems excessive. One hundred million is a truly mind-boggling number to apply to a military expedition, but IMO is much less ... crazy sounding when you factor in the idea of "our entire planet coming to another entire planet's defense". One billion still sounds crazy even when I consider that idea.
Well, let me reconsider. With three million ships ... averaging a third of a thousand each ... but over one million are "personal" vehicles ... Say the personal vehicles have a max complement of 20 on average, that makes 20 million, leaving 980 million for the other 2 million ships ... 490 each ... but three million ships is also crazy ... What is the world population supposed to be? I don't know what a reasonable minimum civilian to military ratio is.
I guess my point is that "a billion" is a kind of number that, instead of just impressing me with its hugeness, actually causes a "wait, what?" reaction that actually takes me out of the story in a way that "one or two hundred million" wouldn't. And the latter numbers are still damn big.
That was the most badass introduction I've ever read...fav immediately. Reminds me of Sins of a Solar Empire story.
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I see your point their though. But I'm sure with the colonial planets joining in as well, it would make sense that the numbers are very high. I don't know if this is in 2250 or so but 1billion would be detrimental to the earth, if alone. Nevertheless this is still epic!!!
The Terran Republic seems to be a solar system realm and not 'galactic yet'. Star Wars had billions involved in the fight and it was 'galactic'.
DAYUM!! Maby its just me but that speech had power! I was ready to load up a space ship and go kill aliens and smile doing it
Really great wrighting I encourage you to keep writing this story could top larger stories like diaries 5/5
*reads beginning*
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*finishes reading*
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Finally! A story that doesn't involve the human governments as over-powered asshats, thank you!
And now they're comin' to kick some serious motherf***ing alien ass in the name of freedom, liberty, and badassery!
AMERICA!!
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This is a great chapter, and the story itself has a great, refreshing concept.
Because of all this, I hereby grant you this:
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Carry On!
So...where do I sign up?