First Love
written by StormLuna
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The constant "she said" and "she replied " felt somewhat repetitive. You might want adjust that.
This is really quite good so far. This is the first Rarity and Fluttershy story I have read, and I'm impressed so far. Well done in making this interesting, you captured the characters really well.