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helmet of salvation


Christian, husband, father and FlutterTwi amalgam. Hope you enjoy my stories. "Let love be genuine. Abhor what is evil; hold fast to what is good." [Rom. 12:9]

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Equestria is facing another Changeling threat. This time the campaign to devour ponies' love is commencing in Ponyville.

It's up to the Princess of Friendship, Twilight Sparkle, and her friends to contain the danger until Shining Armor and Princess Cadance can cast the shape-shifting invaders out.

But when suspicions arise about Twilight herself, will the Power of Friendship be powerful enough to defeat the menace?

Chapters (16)
Comments ( 29 )

Uugghhh that cliff hanger:flutterrage:!!!!! WHY?!:facehoof:

Well any ways hope to see more

>>Twilight Shine

You're not mad at me are you? Please don't be mad at me.

Thanks for the encouragement. Hope to have more up soon.

Another great chapter. Keep up th e great work

5819303 Thanks for the good word, this chapter has some of my favourite moments too. Hope you enjoy what's to come.

"DIS-COOOOORRRRRD!!!"

The deafening blare of Twilight's enraged voice sent the gramophone needle flying with a cacophonous scratch off the record.  The apple juice bottle shattered, spraying its contents everywhere.  The walls of the cabin cracked and splintered.  Fluttershy jumped squealing into Discord's arms for protection as the disintegration spread rapidly and inexorably throughout the gondola, then to the balloon itself, the fabric noisily ripping and tearing until no visible trace of the airship was left.

wow! Twilight must be that loud when she screams her lungs out. I guess when yoi suck the love out of Twi...well...you get this Twi.:twilightangry2:

But i do love me another chapter of this fine storie...wait not fine...:derpyderp2:...i got nothin:derpytongue2:!

Comment posted by Twilight Shine deleted Apr 15th, 2015
Comment posted by Twilight Shine deleted Apr 15th, 2015

5867729 I really appreciate your encouragement and continued readership but can you please keep the major spoilers for other readers out of your comments? Many thanks.

Oh ... god ... no. :facehoof:

IT'S A DISASTER!! :pinkiegasp:

This is a calamity on so many levels. First, Twilight's friends are taking it pretty badly. The survival of the Mane 6's friendship is now shaky. Second, how are Shining Armour and Princess Celestia going to take the news? Shiny would be devastated, even more than Cadence probably. Princess Celestia? She thinks of Twilight as a daughter in some regards so she'd be terribly upset, and very angry with the changelings. Third, how are the Mane 6 going to wield the Rainbow Power if Twilight has severe apathy?

I can sum this up in one word.

SHIPWRECK!!

:twilightoops:SHE CAN'T LOVE ANYPONY ANYMORE! WHICH MEANS SHE WON'T LOVE HER FRIENDS EITHER!

Do not fuck with Cadance.

Seriously. This cute pink pony princess with the wussy girly Love powers will fuck your shit up if you cross her. With Chrysalis' horde smushed like bugs and Sombra reduced to his horn, Cadance is the deadliest alicorn in the show -- not because she's more powerful than Celestia, Luna, or Twilight, but she's much more ruthless. I am so glad to see that here; Cadance is possibly the only one of the four alicorns who would torture an enemy for revenge. Psychological torment, of course, she'd never stoop to physical torture.

And Spinnerette deserves every moment of it.

Love hurts.

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Awesome comment. I'm sick of the idea that femininity = helplessness and a Strong Female Character ™ has to be a butt-kicking warrior or a cold-hearted shrew. Cadance is sweet and vulnerable but she's no pushover. Thanks for the good word.

Comment posted by helmet of salvation deleted Dec 6th, 2015

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I'm sure the ships will be fine.

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That sounds highly disgusting.:ajbemused:

The alicorn princess was now regarding her friends with cocked head and raised eyebrow, her expression one of calm disapproval.
"Problem?"

Seriously imagining that.:rainbowlaugh:Twi with a bemusing, pissed look on her face, staring at the scene in front of her while everyone fights.

I liked it... It was curious.

Discord, if this was your plan from the start, then you are one sneaky conniver. Hats off to the Author!

"So, Princess Prissy-Pants wants to play rough, huh?"

its petty pretty princess prissy pants

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