Dark Flame was a young stallion of the mining village, Stonewall. But after a dragon thought to be of myth attacks, Dark becomes the only survivor and now attempts to remake his life. However, his past isn't willing to let him go so easily.
Spike buys a comic book and finds it fun even though there's blood and gore. Twilight sees him reading it and doesn't approve of him reading it. The book is called 'The Darkness'. how will is not go wrong. Right?
Splintered Lance, Shinning Armor's oldest friend and comrade is reasigned to Ponyville to guard Twilight and the Elements. Can a designer help this battle scarred stallion cope with the sins of his past or will the pain be too much to bear?
Make the paragraphs a little more bite sized , My eyeballs exploded from so much words at once...
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Could use some more editing, but I for one am looking forward to this story
Great job.
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Do you know a good editor?
Thank you limelight, and if your looking for the second chapter, I apologize, but don't hold your breath. Super busy but I will try hard
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Not really, sorry
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That's ok