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A colt lays in a hospital bed, in a coma. If things continue as they are, he will certainly die.

Luna has begun experimenting with her newly discovered dream roaming powers, and has taken an interest in the colt. She believes she can wake him, but first she has to aid him in confronting his inner most fears.

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I like Luna's method for escaping dreams and her devotion to practice. I also like the foal's responses to her showing up. Not a princess there? I wonder why not. Also--Maryland? How do they know Maryland? It's interesting that his accounts, which are so important, are in the red. Maybe it represents his slipping away from life.

Weird that she doesn't answer his question! I wonder what she'd up to. It's also weird he made things difficult for her given that he's afraid of death. Why isn't he begging for her help?

Strange. I don't get who the speaker is. Death? It didn't make a ton of sense to me, but was an interesting idea. I like the idea that Celestia's violent magical upheavals were able to disrupt the fabric of dreams enough for Luna to escape, even though she didn't know what she was doing. It must have led to quite a time of reflection for both sisters.

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If you look at the map of Equestria released around season 4, I think. It shows Equestria as very similar to the United States. Baltimare would be in Maryland. I didn't think "Mare-Land" was a good name.

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