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Perry Note


Im a girl who like Mlp and anime... No judging my stories and no rude comments... Enjoy!

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Melody Hood was a simple pony. A simple mare that lived in the woods, with the nearest city 20 miles away... Until a city comes with no name, no history, and full of life. Or at least, she thinks it's life..

Cover by me... Enjoy!!

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*sniff*
Once you find love, it breaks away?
What a horrible fate...
such a horrible fate...
Whoever used such a curse shall die...

Melody hood was a simple pony.

I'm guessing that the word "hood" is part of her name? If so, why isn't it capitalized?

Come to think of it, your story title and chapter title could use some proper capitalization as well.

5640261 Oh wow... I didn't catch that "hood" part..

Second, Yes, I guess I'm just more of a beginner at writing.. and typing, to be honest...

But I'll try my best to make it better and thank you for telling me my mistake! :scootangel:

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Heh... Life is a bit cruel...

Whoever used such a curse shall die...

:pinkiesad2:..... Wait... A CURSE!? OH GOD.... Do I need vaccination for it?

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