Luna's diary

Celestia finds a diary that Luna had. Where did it come from? She reads page by page, Finding out something tragic, heart warming, and Beautiful

Cover Art: Becuo.com
Additional thanks to my friends Melody whisk, Breezer Note, And Shimmer for prereading and editing...

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Perry Note

Perry Note #1 · Jan 29th, 2015 · · ·

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Thanx Harmonic!

SirScribe

SirScribe #2 · Jan 29th, 2015 · · ·

I loved it! Beautifully written and really captured that Luna felt. Edgar Allen Poe? Excellent choice to draw inspiration from. Awesome work

Perry Note

Perry Note #3 · Jan 29th, 2015 · · ·

5564945 I agree with you on choosing Edgar Allan Poe.... His raven poem is simply amazing! It fills a great mood to the dark background...

U knw what I mean?

SirScribe

SirScribe #4 · Jan 29th, 2015 · · ·

5564968 Yeah, Mr. Poe is the father of dark literature

Gaze

Gaze #5 · Jan 29th, 2015 · · ·

I sensed a little mhe~ with the dialogue between Rose and Tia, but ignoring that, is a good story, short and with a clear message.

PS: I can notice, in the form of the pauses, the influence of Mr. Poe (is classical in his stories) ;P

Perry Note

Perry Note #6 · Jan 29th, 2015 · · ·

5565140 I didn't intent to put "too" much details on that part with Rose and Celestia.... But yes, I really get the influence from Mr. Poe! He is amazing, don't u think?

Xanderfox

Xanderfox #7 · Jan 30th, 2015 · · ·

I'm not sure of what the intention really was, but I took that it was Celestia finally releasing her pent up emotions and regrets for the mistakes of the past that still haunt her and the joy in realizing she and Luna had a second chance. It's something I see as a dominate trait of Celestia's character, her focus on harmony and friendship be a direct result of losing Luna for 1000 years and never wanting to repeat the mistakes which caused it.

Perry Note

Perry Note #8 · Jan 30th, 2015 · · ·

5566990 Actually... That was what my intention of putting this story up was for.... To make it simpler, I wanted to make it sound like Celestia felt her Mistakes and regreted it......

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