After AJ had left, Rarity sat down, thinking about her own feelings towards Applejack. Deciding there was no better place to think, she went to the spa, where she got the most complicated and expensive treatment they had. Through the bath, she pondered, in the stream room, she thought. The masseuse commented on her being tense as she reckoned, and the mud bath let her contemplate. Finally, as she was rinsed from the mud bath, she realized. She was in love with Applejack. The white unicorn gasped, letting her fall from her chair. She was a fillyfooler. But that led to why she had wanted the prince. She continued thinking, and realized it was just for title. Worried about the realization, she couldn't relax, even as Aloe came to remove her cucumbers and robe, letting her leave. What was she going to tell Applejack, if she did? She walked home, letting her hooves become slightly dirty as she walked around. Finally, she stopped by Roseluck's and purchased some roses. What says it better than roses, right? She wondered if it was too cheesy, but decided it wasn't and headed home, still debating whether or not to give them to Applejack.
Great story, my absolutely favorite ship,just as the comment above I cannot wait for a full fanfic based on these outlines. Probably the only thing that didn't sit well with me was this: "letting her fall from her chair. She was a fillyfooler" it feels odd and a little bit rushed, and from what I've gathered she's not into mares but one mare (Applejack). This kind of revelations should take time for a person (or a pony,lol) to digest and later come in terms with their sexuality .
Can't wait for more.
So far so good!! This is my 2nd favorite (apart from TwiDash, clearly) couple!!! I am really liking this story, keep up the good work!