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Stranded

Ponies start to vanish, but no one is questioning it. Until one mare decides to get to the bottom of it. How will she fare? And will she discover the secrets of the missing ponies?

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Chapter 1: It Begins · 10th Feb 2015 · 1,464 words
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Chapter 2: Lighting Bow · 22nd Feb 2015 · 1,102 words
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Chapter 3: A Community · 23rd Feb 2015 · 1,482 words
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BlazingWings

BlazingWings #1 · Feb 24th, 2015 · · · Chapter 3: A Community ·

It better not be the same two ponies disliking this intriguing story!

BlazingWings

BlazingWings #2 · Feb 24th, 2015 · · · Chapter 3: A Community ·

Will there be another chapter or two, or more... ending the story line?

EndyTheDragoon

EndyTheDragoon #3 · Feb 24th, 2015 · · · Chapter 3: A Community ·

5663275 There will indeed be more chapters!

Exemter

Exemter #4 · Apr 3rd, 2015 · · · Chapter 1: It Begins ·

It's not a bad story, but you do need some improvement. Aside from misspellings and a lack of substance it's got the potential to be good, you just need to work on your filling and grammar a bit. By substance and filling I mean the little details in between everything, like how she describes herself when looking in the mirror. It was too abrupt and short to really make it capture an image in the reader's mind. That said I don't have any other criticisms, and it seems like a good fic. Just work on those things I mentioned above.