A few hobbies of mine would be animating, drawing, and writing. Wouldn't it be crazy if I got a job that includes one of those in the future? ...Pfft... Naaah....
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There's three of us, and only room for two, I need to pick someone... who would that be?
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EDIT 8/2/15: This got on popular stories? Yay! But err... why?
EDIT AGAIN: What are you still doing here? Go listen to this dramatic reading by NerfStranger! https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=ynAJ831yg2g
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AN HOUR!? THIS WOULD TAKE ME WEEKS TO FINNISH! HOW DARE YOU HOG ALL OF THE TALENT?!
5600044 I DON'T. LIKE SHARING
Seriously though, thank you
Wow that was sad.
But this story needs some constructive critism.
I like what you did with the Discordxcelestia ship in this story. But I had no idea what was going on in the beginning. Maybe you planned it that way so we can come to a realisation later but it kinda left me confused. Perhaps others will to.
What I can tell is It is around the time of Mlp series since you mention The Mane Six. And apparently Discord and Celestia had a child but Celestia died giving birth. Discord sacrifice the child to save Celestia then sacrifice himself to save the child.
Interesting concept yet I wouldn't tag this a sad story completely. It is more of a Tragedy.
But overall I like the idea of Discord learning the value of Sacrifice. And now I wonder if you'll do something like this in your other fimfiction. Like a reference to the ending of the Reflections Arc in the Mlp Comics?
5600314 Talented Writing right here everypony
5600378 Always appreciate critism, so thank you!
Yep, you got the story right, that's exactly what happened.
I think one of my weaknesses is setting up a story at the beginning, so I won't deny it's something I need to work on. I was trying to aim for a beginning that would drag the reader in by saying "huh, what's happening?" but I don't know if it worked very well.
Either way, I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the critique so that I can improve in the future!
5600666 Maybe to make the story more compelling is to name the child?
But perhaps maybe it might have been better to left the child unnamed to add to the atmosphere of the story to pull readers.
So heres a brainteaser, What would you name Discord and Celestia child?
5600702 Hmm... I actually have two ocs with names that I'd use. I think I'd name the child either Courtesy or Turbid, depending on who they take after.
holly fuckin crab
i cried soooo hard
and i was reading out loud
goooosh soooo saaaad
daaaamn
but thank you so much
you know what?
i will make an reading video for youtube from it O_O yeees ill do that ^^
5603131 I FEED OFF OF TEARS! MUHAHAHA!
Either way, thank you. I'm glad you liked it. xD
Also, you would actually do that?
holy frick thank chu
5603219 haha i already did record it ^^ im editing it right now
so it will be on youtube in an hour i think :DD
5603475 That's great! This is the first ever reading someone's done for me, so I can't thank you enough!
I also refuse to fall asleep before the video gets uploaded. Who needs eight hour sleep?
5603484 well i only get five hours sleep every day ^^
thats the first reading im uploaDING o_o
IVE NEVER DONE IT BEFORE HAHA
CAUSE MOST OF THE FANFITIONS I READ ARE VERY LONG
BUT IN THE FUTURE IF ITS A SHORT FANFICTION LIKE THIS AND IS AS AMAZING AS THIS THEN I WILL MAKE READINGS ^^
AAARG god damn i dont want to rewrite this xD so ill let it big haha
but seriosly your storys are amazing ^^
5603532 I'm working on another one right now, but it's about half done, and it's already 7000 words long .-.
Also, thanks for the watch!
5603540
a NEW ONE O_O
im still wating for Start, Fall Apart, Rebuild aand No Elements, No Harmony xDD
5603556 ...Oh frick, I need to finish that chapter of S,FA,R. But after a 4000 word long chapter of NENH, I'm taking a short break from it. Not too long though... I'm going straight back to working on it as soon as I get back from my holiday in a week
5603564 no stress bro ^^
yeah and just that youre not wondering
im German and maybe my english sounds a bit of at some points ^^ so dont wonder xD
is this new story gonna be Dislestia too ?
5603587 Yes and no. Discord and Celestia are the main characters, but I'm aiming it to be more of a complex relationship like in I'm not a fan of Puppeteers... which I'm actually writing an epilogue to right now
...I'm starting to consider that Discord and Celestia is the writing equivalent to drugs. They're so addictive.
5603600 niiiice :D im already excited ^^
oh and the video is up in 50 minutes
5603606 Awesome! Make sure to link me when it's up
5603610 i promise i will ^^
5603610 30 Minutes leeft xDD
5603680 yay
THEEER IT IIIIS :DD YAY
5603842 HOLY FRICK that was even better than I expected
Thank you so much!! 
5603907 so glad you liked it :DD
5603907 Congrats on your first dramatic reading of your story.
Now if someone could do No Elements No Harmony...
5650928 I was so happy about it
Maybe when it's finished... Maybe.
This... Oh god, tears are everywhere. I loved this so much.
Yeah, you can tell it was written in an hour... a bit short, even through a story like this is best served short.
6520208 I guess one hour stories have a purpose
OMG I actually cried this so beautiful
NNNNOOOOO THE PAIN!!!!
MY HHEEAARRTT!!!
NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! WHYYYY!!!!!!!!!!! I LITERALLY CRIED! THIS IS SOOO SAD AND BEAUTIFUL
WWWWWWWWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!