Although it left it, it knew that it was right, it made it down, because it didn't know what's up.
The Le Fancy Restaurant prides itself in being one of the best serving restaurants in Canterlot. The food is excellent. The wine is superb. The mood is romantic and intimate. Most ponies come out happy and satisfied. Except one mare, her mood is spoiling the appetite of other customers.
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Considering I have Blueblood as a Marshal, think Texas Ranger, in my headcanon, him as a secret agent isn't that far of a stretch. Plus somepony has to keep an eye on the various nobles for corruption.
Over all, very well done and I consider this an excellent take on both Mrs. Cake and Blueblood.
That was well done, and I don't have any real gripes with the story. Good work.
That was an excellent way to show Blueblood in a different light, great job with Mrs. Cake too.
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Thanks, all! I fixed some parts of the story and I'm glad you like it.
I'm happy to see a rocky romance between Mrs. and Mr. Cake turn out for the better (presumably). I'm glad Blueblood helped her out with her feelings.
An interesting little short.
Very nicely done. This is a lovely character piece.
Beautiful short. Well written but for an error (possible error) I spotted. Still, it did not interrupt my imagination from imagining.
I, too, imagine Prince Blueblood to be some sort of (secret) agent. And that idea was beautifully well presented in this story.
I wish I could write short stories. But my latest attempt turned into a 5,000+ word installment.
Thumbs upping and shelving.
Some possible correction:
1. “Perhaps you should make a booking somewhere local and catch up with your husband on a day you a guaranteed to be free. Spending your anniversary on your anniversary may be special, but I’m sure you’ve come to realise it’s nothing without your one true partner.”
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5598389 Oh oops! Thank you, well spotted.
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Es genial